The Breath that Passed from You to Me (3/?)

Feb 13, 2010 17:40



Rating: M
Word Count: 2867
Summary: Takes place after Mark and Lexie's very short, very unsatisfying, conversation/fight/whatever at the end of 6x12.

Chapter 3 )

char: mark sloan, fanfiction, author: drzlilsuga, pairing: lexie/mark, tv: grey's anatomy, series: between two lungs, char: lexie grey

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drzlilsuga February 14 2010, 06:08:17 UTC
Aww. Mark. :(
Poor Mark, he's gonna be in pain for a while.

Breaking my heart here!
The chapter of how he's searching for her stuff in the apartment is so sad. :(
Lol, I tend to be a little(very) angsty in my fics.

Very ironic haha.
It really is lol.

Thanks for the amazing long chapter! Great work. You write them so well. I hope your hand feels better!!
Thank you so much for this awesome review!! My hand does feel better thanks!

OH, and I love your layout. Love Max & Liz.
<3 YAY, I love when I find other Roswell fans out there =D

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hollyjo12 February 14 2010, 15:09:22 UTC
Now see, you can't just leave it like that and expect me not to pester you about it. I can't wait to see behind the kitchen door.

Loved Mark thinking back to the night she moved in and what that meant to him and the panic he felt when he came home to an empty apartment. Loved that he stayed and took care of her, putting his jacket over her.

Wonderful chapter. Ready for more.

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drzlilsuga February 15 2010, 05:54:19 UTC
hehe, I love cliffhangers lol.

Thank you so much for the review!!

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krizue February 14 2010, 22:56:24 UTC
Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!
I hate seeing Mark in pain, but he sort of deserves it, it's important for him to realize that a relationship is built between both of them, and even whe Lex break up with him, it doesn't mean it doesn't hurt her too....

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drzlilsuga February 15 2010, 05:58:55 UTC
I know! I hate the Mark thinks that just because Lexie broke up with him, that she's not in pain too.

Thank you so much for the review!!! <3

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lattelady6 February 15 2010, 04:31:25 UTC
The leather settled around her body like Mark’s arms wrapped around her. A small tear escaped her eye and ran down her cheek. Lexie wiped it away furiously as she walked to the kitchen.

Those lines almost at the end had tears running down my face. Please give them the happy ending Grey's seems to be denying them.

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drzlilsuga February 15 2010, 06:00:39 UTC
It's always wonderful to hear that something I've written inspires an emotional reaction!
Thank you so much for this review! <3

The happy ending will happen with time lol =D

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