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Nothing Less Than Divine - Chapter 1

Jan 29, 2007 21:24

TITLE: Nothing Less Than Divine.

AUTHOR/ARTIST: bulma90_13.

RATING: NC-17.

PAIRING: John/Bobby, ???/Bobby.

SUMMARY: When one of the students at Xavier’s School for the Gifted is sexually assaulted, Special Victims Unit steps in to uncover the truth.

WARNINGS: Non-consensual, language, work in progress, crossover.

NOTES: Yeah, the story is on ( Read more... )

title: n, rating: nc-17, fiction: series, author: bulma90_13

Comments 26

Aahh...*sigh* blackbunnysite January 29 2007, 21:35:31 UTC

Have read your story already to chapter six...XD I love it. But there's one thing that was not logical.
If John is a known terrorist, then why would he care about something like a "restraining order"? That's kind of..uhm...strange...
As for everything else: It's really sweet how John cares for Bobby and I find the crossover in this case, good. Because it makes sense.

*kisses* blackbunnysite

Re: Aahh...*sigh* bulma90_13 January 29 2007, 22:43:01 UTC

you are so right....
hmm....
i never thought about that, obviously...
damn, this is why i need a beta.
hmm...well, i guess he left more for the reason that the parents were coming rather than he actually was afraid of the laws. and i guess he was already taking a risk by being around the cops for so long and he needed an excuse to get out of there, because obviously Logan told them about john's mutation and it would be so easy to render him helpless.
i don't know, looking back at that explaination, it looks sucky.
ok, i admit i made a boo boo.
thanks for pointing it out. maybe i'll fix that one day, but for now, just go with it...?
really, thank you!

Re: Aahh...*sigh* blackbunnysite January 30 2007, 11:05:58 UTC

Yeah, well...it's not such a big mistake or anything. And as I said I love your story. You know if I could, I would like to beta your story, but I'm a german gril so I wouldn't be much help at all I think...*drop*

Re: Aahh...*sigh* blackbunnysite January 30 2007, 11:07:35 UTC

PS: What about if John get's called away? Magneto or mystique could send him a message or phone him??

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train_diskense January 29 2007, 22:11:28 UTC

....Blackbunnysite is right about the restraining order thingy. o__o Butbut. I can totally overlook that. *nods*

bulma90_13 January 29 2007, 22:44:05 UTC

yay! overlooking is good unless someone can fix it easily. i tried to think of a way, but none of it works...

leatharegee January 29 2007, 22:15:20 UTC

Oh man, I've been reading this over at AFF, and I can't tell you how glad I am that you're putting on on LJ so I can see when it gets updated. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapters!

bulma90_13 January 29 2007, 22:45:20 UTC

i just updated to chapter 7 on aff not two minutes ago, so if you want to spoil the surprise...

leatharegee January 30 2007, 02:12:02 UTC

w00t! i'll be heading there now... :P

sj_snugglebug January 29 2007, 23:24:57 UTC

*Squees* Wooohooo! Johnness. (=
I love Logan! =D
And I love this fic! =D

bulma90_13 January 30 2007, 19:58:53 UTC

thank you! (:

asinnerofsorts January 29 2007, 23:29:56 UTC

As I am not a member of aff dot net, considered me interested

^_^

bulma90_13 January 30 2007, 19:59:59 UTC

will do! thanks for reading.