on display [1/1]

Apr 08, 2011 15:47

title; on display.
rating; nc-17.
pairing; ryden.
word count; ~1500.
warnings; public sex, humiliation, name-calling, fisting, mentions of other BDSM activities.
summary; Ryan is in the middle of the room, on his knees, for everyone to see. It shouldn't make him moan, but it does.

if modesty disappeared, so would exhibitionism. )

kink, standalone, nc-17, ryden

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qtlymakingnoise April 9 2011, 03:17:48 UTC
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This entire thing, from Ryan's desperation for Brendon, to Brendon clearly loving him (how quickly he took Ryan from what could become an uncomfortable situation, how he took his own shirt off...) was wonderful.

I have such a thing for powerplay, and you always write it wonderfully, with just the right balance of sex and emotion. You're a spectacular writer! I can't help but admire you.

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druscilla_way April 9 2011, 17:33:04 UTC
Thank you so much<33333

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druscilla_way April 9 2011, 17:33:12 UTC
Thank you<3333

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druscilla_way April 9 2011, 17:33:38 UTC
Thank you for commenting on the relationship. I think it says more for the porn part if there's a relationship behind in and for you to point that out. Just thanks<3333

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at_the_c_side April 13 2011, 20:35:22 UTC
I love this, how you can see how much Brendon cares for Ryan and the fact that there's actually a relationship underneath it all. This is really good, just, afdhsjfhsdlk <3
I've just started a Ryden fic, my first fic ever and I'm new to this site and all that, if you could maybe check out the first chapter that'd be great. :3

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quvameal April 15 2011, 01:41:12 UTC
great post as usual!

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