on display [1/1]

[druscilla_way]

title; on display.
rating; nc-17.
pairing; ryden.
word count; ~1500.
warnings; public sex, humiliation, name-calling, fisting, mentions of other BDSM activities.
summary; Ryan is in the middle of the room, on his knees, for everyone to see. It shouldn't make him moan, but it does.

Comments

[kaseyjayde]

Oh golly, I dont even know what to think.
It's weird reading something where Brendon is the one with all the rules, but I like it.
You are most defiantly a great writer, but I am sure you know that by now.

wow

[teaandroses]

that gave me chills

[sweetaliss]

Your relationships are always really touching and realistic. The emotion is perfectly conveyed. Just in my personal opinion, I love that you incorporate smoking into all your stories, it's not common enough. It would, of course, contribute to the emotional and physical factors, and you portray that like a veteran ;)

That said, I want to do naughty things when I read this story by myself....

[patd_lover06]

I can't even... just amazing! ajsofllkdncodjffqio

[ext_1331967]

That was amazing. Surprisingly sweet after all the intense emotion, want, NEED.
You can feel the deep relationship these two have during the whole thing. I was writhing the whole time, JUST from the intense emotion of it all.

You, my friend, have a great talent.