OMG... this is so ... intense and horrifying and sad. And I'm not sure if that's good. xD But your writing sure is, a really haunting piece.
"He sits there, and, silently, he grips the jacket of Orihara Izaya more tightly around his neck." Probably my favorite line. I wonder what was going through Izaya's head. It's a strange thing reading this, feels like everything is so frail.. Makes you wonder what could happen if Shizuo's outbursts weren't as comical as they are portrayed. =(
O_O Damn that was dark. Wonderful but dark as hell! *shivers* I was totally getting flashes of Ladd and Claire from Baccano! too. For the the record I don't like dark stuff but this was just haunting. Well done.
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"He sits there, and, silently, he grips the jacket of Orihara Izaya more tightly around his neck."
Probably my favorite line. I wonder what was going through Izaya's head. It's a strange thing reading this, feels like everything is so frail.. Makes you wonder what could happen if Shizuo's outbursts weren't as comical as they are portrayed. =(
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Ouch, this.
Rather stirring piece regardless anon. The snapshots we got, instead of the whole thing was much more effective!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH ANON!
This was perfect, there's so much feeling on Shizuo's side!
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Wonderful prompt, by the way. I almost cried just reading it.
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Damn that was dark. Wonderful but dark as hell! *shivers* I was totally getting flashes of Ladd and Claire from Baccano! too. For the the record I don't like dark stuff but this was just haunting. Well done.
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Anon. That was, uh. Demented. Fuck that was awesome and sad ;___;
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