(dbsk; fanfic) curves with edges.

May 04, 2014 21:11

Yunho/Jaejoong | pg13
There are a few things that remind Jaejoong of Yunho

stupidfroggie said “military, sea, and maybe (a bit of) angst ? ((:”
and yeah well, this! :D I hope you like it, love.

yunjae )

!requests, fandom: tvxq, author: yunhore, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg-13

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yunhore May 4 2014, 15:41:33 UTC
stupidfroggie May 4 2014, 17:57:44 UTC
Oh, wow, this was so perfect ! I really loved it, thank you very much for writing it.
And the age gap was like the icing on the cake.

Jaejoong frowns and walks up to the older man, presses their body together and kisses Yunho. It’s a slow and languid kiss, neither of them are in a hurry to let go of each other, they are taking their time with the kiss. Jaejoong can taste the salt of the ocean on Yunho’s lips and he sighs into the kiss.
I particularly loved this moment. ;~~; It was so very well-written, and somehow, I perfectly pictured the scene !

Once again, thank you, their romance is beautiful and simple, and the slight angst was perfect♥.
(36-year-old Yunho is so sexy, in my mind, even more if he used to be in the army, god ... **)

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kas2umi May 4 2014, 16:05:18 UTC
You know, I actually cried. That part when Jaejoong is leaving and Yunho is all "I'm an old man, go. Live your life." It really struck me. And then I laughed at the end :)
This is really beautiful.
<3

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phinea2009 May 4 2014, 17:10:56 UTC
I'm glad they found each other again. I love happy endings.

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n3uromanc3r May 4 2014, 17:42:33 UTC
It was so lovely, I really liked it, thank you very much!

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imanizzati May 4 2014, 17:53:15 UTC
I like how they're in love but not attached with each other.

And Boa's understanding surprised me. I thought it's going to be one of those 'bitchy wife gonna slap you in the face when she finds out' fic. Ah well.

(silently trying to coax you into writing KKHH!YJ)

(because the world needs it Kiti. it needs a Jung Rahul Yunho and Kim Jaenjali)

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