REVISED SAMPLE: Ventus landed with a sickening thud, feeling something crack. A spray of blood in his cough proved it as he scrambled to his feet, leaning heavily on Wayward Wind. Wiping his mouth, he glared daggers as Vanitas advanced on him, burying that fear, that urge to just give in and yield and avoid as much pain as possible. He couldn't do that - he couldn't. Not - Not now. It'd been so long since he'd felt even this much anger, even with his self hatred at what he'd done. He needed this fight. He'd been lied to, tricked, used - even though he knew, in his heart, that had been why he'd been permitted to 'sneak off after Vanitas had wounded Aqua.... Following her had been his first mistake. Giving in to that
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And now he was on a world that was filled light. And, for as broken as he was - his determination to escape and leave the Darkness was overwhelming. The only problem was overcoming said Darkness. Who, as much as he hated to admit it - was still stronger than him, better trained and more ruthless than he could even think of
( ... )
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First D_M post - he's not as 'broken' in this one. // KHDR Entry - not every long. :( // D_M thread -Opinions, what are they again? // Last words meme where he get's some happy. // D_M post and a Last Words meme = Rebellion of a sorts, but he still eventually falls back into doing what Vani wants.
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Ventus landed with a sickening thud, feeling something crack. A spray of blood in his cough proved it as he scrambled to his feet, leaning heavily on Wayward Wind. Wiping his mouth, he glared daggers as Vanitas advanced on him, burying that fear, that urge to just give in and yield and avoid as much pain as possible. He couldn't do that - he couldn't. Not - Not now. It'd been so long since he'd felt even this much anger, even with his self hatred at what he'd done. He needed this fight. He'd been lied to, tricked, used - even though he knew, in his heart, that had been why he'd been permitted to 'sneak off after Vanitas had wounded Aqua.... Following her had been his first mistake. Giving in to that ( ... )
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