Fic: Blurred Blue Lines - Part 1 (Ensemble, Sharon Raydor- The Closer) - M

[dreamaway78]

Title: Blurred Blue Lines- Part 1

Word Count: 3066
Rating: M (to be safe)

Fandom: Closer

Characters: Ensemble, Sharon Raydor

Warnings: Language, Mention of Assault and Violence

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters. No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: Major Crimes has had their share of cases where the violence of the crimes committed

Comments

[anonymous]

woah...
this is incredible.
the characters are so spot on and the emotions they all convey are astounding. wow. the situation is horrible and gruesome and just so awful, which i mean as a compliment. great idea, written beautifully.
(also i imagined chief keaton as eddie james olmos and that his rage was because he and sharon are in love. probably not what you were going form but i thought i would let you know.)

[dreamaway78]

Thank-you, I am glad you are liking it so far. As for EJO, I sort of picture him as my Chief Keating but I am not sure about the rest of it.

[rebakathy]

So...wow. That's about the strongest I can muster at the moment. This is amazing and heartbreaking. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

[dreamaway78]

Thank-you. And wow works for me =) . Seriously though I am glad you liked it.

[dreamaway78]

Thank-you, You always say the nicest things about my writing. I am glad you think the characters are true to themselves, I am really trying to keep them there and not make them OTT.

[hugamoose]

I loved it, I can't wait to read the next chapter, very well written the descriptions really helped set the stage and the mood of the chapter!

[dreamaway78]

Glad you liked it. It's a little darker than my other stories but hopefully that does take away from its appeal.

[streepfan]

Oh my goood !!! It's just great, i can't wait for the sequel! THank you to write this and share with us, you have a real good writer it's amazing !

[dreamaway78]

Thank-you. There will be more, I just need to get it flowing and prettied up some.