Fic: Blurred Blue Lines - Part 1 (Ensemble, Sharon Raydor- The Closer) - M

[dreamaway78]

Title: Blurred Blue Lines- Part 1

Word Count: 3066
Rating: M (to be safe)

Fandom: Closer

Characters: Ensemble, Sharon Raydor

Warnings: Language, Mention of Assault and Violence

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters. No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: Major Crimes has had their share of cases where the violence of the crimes committed

Comments

[moodweather]

Wow, this was ... intense. You've done a great job setting up mood for the story - really vivid visuals. I'll be interested to see how you progress this one. Thanks for sharing!

[dreamaway78]

Glad you liked the first part, hopefully you will continue liking the story as it continues.

[laurakay715]

Wow! What an opening! I love how you've written all the characters, especially Taylor. I could practically *hear* him saying what you'd written. I can't wait to read more!

[dreamaway78]

Oh good! I am glad you could actually "hear" Taylor. I really want to try and stay in character for all of them but sometimes its hard with certain characters and their dynamics. So it makes me really happy hearing that. As for more, its coming, it's just coming a bit slow right now.

[lindy999]

This actaully drained me emotionally. You are a very powerful writer. I will read more of this as you write it even though I know this is going to be very dark. My heart is breaking for Sharon and for all of them right now.

[dreamaway78]

I don't know about powerful, but thank-you for saying it. I was a little drained after writing it. I plan on continuing it, fingers crossed that I get to the ending.

[dreamaway78]

It's a little dark, but I love angst for some reason.

[poppylovers]

I really hope you continue this story. I want to find out who did this.