[fic] Hazards of cold-weather camping (One Piece, ZoLu smut)

[drcalvin]

Title: Hazards of cold-weather camping
Pairing/Characters: Zoro/Luffy (cameos from Usopp, Robin and Brook)
Rating: Very much NC-17
Warnings: Unusual use of Gum-Gum Fruit abilities. I had to draw a stick-figure diagram to keep up with things, if we put it like that. Also no beta (yet)
Timeline/Spoilers: Takes place around chapter 660, Punk Hazard

Comments

[ichigo_otaku01]

I'm not sure HOW I'm going to be able to reply to this properly. *takes a deep breath*

Holy hell, that was amazing. The fluff, the smut, the humor, the romance, it all works together in one of the best fics I've ever read. Such an amazing way to take the prompt, I'm so glad I didn't chicken out when I thought I'd come up with something stupid. And THE INTERACTIONS. Usopp, I want to know why you're so interested. ; )

Thank you so much for listening to my prompt. As much as their position confused me at first, ME GUSTA. <3

[drcalvin]

^___^ Thank you!

Okay, confession time: I'd been loosely plotting several what-if scenarios at PH (the hot, the cold, the body-swap... so much to play with!!!) and your prompt gave me the excuse to sit down and finish one of them.

Haha, with Usopp, I'm basically pulling the old "I want what SHE just ordered!" joke ;) Like, he's probably been unwilling audience before, so he knows this is something extra nice. Anything that can make Luffy sound like THAT ought to be worth trying at least once, ne? I bet he and Robin heard more than a little of their arguments too,

As much as their position confused me at firstYeah, I figured. that might happen. I've asked my beta to go through this. But becasue she's busy and I'm about to become super busy, I didn't want to leave it until we were both done. Hopefully in a not too far-off future, there'll be a second version of this with slightly clearer body positions

[ichigo_otaku01]

Finding excuses to use plot bunnies in the works, I've done that before. : ) Glad I could give you an opportunity to use one of your own ideas! And yes, with Usopp I just can't help but giggle at his curiosity.

As for the position, while it did take a couple rereads, it started to make sense. It also doesn't help that I read while sitting at a very crowded table of Magic players and college students, so really most confusion is on my part. It's still absolutely awesome and one of the things I love about this pairing.

[drcalvin]

Best thing about writing Luffy having sex: Nobody can accuse you of him having an unrealistically long reach. Also, sudden extra limbs can be blamed on Robin :P

You're braver than I am, m'dear, I never even dare read fic at the train in case of /homg/ someone reading over my shoulder and noticing a s-e-x s-c-e-n-e.

[siseja]

Oh my gackt, this was amazing <3
Just.. how went from absolutely hot, to heart warmingly sweet, to giggle-worthy hilarity
I'm not all that much into the ZoLu pairing, as I am eternally convinced that Luffy is asexual, but you certainly pulled it off
and omg
Brook, Usopp and ROBIN <3
xD I had a hard time keeping track of Luffy's limbs
...
Also, sorry for creepin' on your LJ

[drcalvin]

Thanks for commenting! And you're welcome to creep here anytime you wish ^^

Oh my gackt

I earned a Gackt \o/

Well, canon Luffy is if not asexual then obviously not currently having sex. For fic, we are however free to take some liberties imo ;) Despite what I just posted, I see both him and Zoro as rather low-libido persons. They might have amazing epic sex once they're doing it, but it's not the first thing on their minds and not the second, third or fifth either. But when you're too cold to sleep anyway and lying naked together, heck, why not? =D

Sorry for the limb-confusion, I tried to keep it to a minimum ^^;;

[siseja]

Yes, you did indeed earn a Gackt
Here you go~

[drcalvin]

*drools all over Gackt* OM NOM NOM!!!

Fun thing with writing Luffy, if you have an excuse to write the silliest and most impossible positions

True! He's really a fun character to write having sex, for this and his attitude too

[ihavebaddays]

Let me just say, that I completely agree with Robin. A visual demonstration would not go amiss. I'm practically fainting from laughter and appreciation.

You portray the joy and love amidst this crew better than any I have read yet. It's so silly, and yet so thrilling and true. Even just those little moments of argument is just - PERFECTION.

Thank you for writing such impeccable stories. Please continue!

Kudos.

[drcalvin]

Thank you so much! It's very flattering and encouraging to be told that I write in character ^_^

Let me just say, that I completely agree with Robin. A visual demonstration would not go amiss.

Alas, you'll have to bribe someone else to draw that. My art skills are equal to Luffy's, unfortunately

[ihavebaddays]

Just keep doing what you do, and I will continue to stalk you. ^^

[selfphobia]

AHHH that was really great. I especially love how you make Zoro's soft spot for Luffy so apparent, this was so sweet. and sexy! and Usopp and Robin's lines were hilarious! just all-around awesomeness rolled up into a delicious burrito.

[drcalvin]

Thank you so much! ^___^

(wow, your icon = teh sexy!)

[dethorats]

I feel bad because when I comment, I just want to rave about how awesomely you've written everyone that is NOT Luffy or Zoro. But, asldkfjasdkf, USOPP! ROBIN! BROOK! I was laughing so hard every time they had a line because they're all perfect. And the reason I don't have as much to say about Luffy or Zoro is becasue, well, they're just so excellent! Augh, it was so smexy, but the cute sweetness at the end is what ultimately did me in. Excellent work and I'm sad that school's going to be getting in the way of more in the immediate future but I look forward to summer break! This is getting saved to be read again, btw!

[drcalvin]

Haha, don't feel that way! As much as I OTP Zoro and Luffy, I just want to have everyone else there too, because they're nakama darnit. Somehow, the pairing doesn't really feel complete if they're moving in a vacuum without all the others. Also, teasing Usopp is fun ;P

Thank you so much for your comment! It warms my heart - and makes me a bit miffed with myself for not getting into this pairing properly at an earlier date, there turned out to be so many nice things and lovely people here once I did a bit of searching ^^