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Foolish

Feb 09, 2009 23:30

Title: Foolish
Author: angelps_7
Rating: PG
Word Count: 596
Notes/Warning: This was written for Day 2 of the 'I Want the Fairy Tale' challenge. A bit on the sadder side, at least for me because I tend to write comedy and such.

Used 2 quotes: "I'm just a girl, standing in front of a boy, asking him to love her." and "No one has said "whoopsidaisies" ( Read more... )

angelps_7, valentine2009, 501-1499

Comments 21

sarahyyy February 10 2009, 07:51:34 UTC

I love this! I love unrequited Dramione fics. And the way you wrote it made it feel full of hope and all. =D Great job on this!

angelps_7 February 10 2009, 16:23:23 UTC

Aw thank you! I'm glad you saw it as hopeful, I hoped it wouldn't come across too sad.

reetinkerbell February 10 2009, 09:54:11 UTC

I'm glad Hermione tried, and still has hope. I'm sure Draco just needs to let it all sink in and realise he still feels the same - or more. :P At least that's what I'm hoping. :P

Very nice.

Only one thing; His smile brings a sense of comfort arou"No one has - I think maybe the word program you're using did something bad.

angelps_7 February 10 2009, 16:09:56 UTC

Oh no! I must fix that. Thanks for pointing it out, I didn't even notice! =)

reetinkerbell February 10 2009, 16:32:18 UTC

The dangers of writing and posting all in one go - I've made oopsies similar to yours myself plenty of times to know I shouldn't, but it doesn't stop me from doing it still. :P

angelps_7 February 14 2009, 20:43:11 UTC

lols! It just happens, can't help it! haha no worries, and thank you again for pointing it out. You know when you read your own writing too many times while editing that your eyes just skip over parts? That's what happens to me sometimes =P

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greatestheroine February 10 2009, 11:26:51 UTC

At the end of the day, what matters is that she tried... And I guess, him taking her hand is a sign that he's giving things a chance, giving them a chance :)

nice work! :)

angelps_7 February 10 2009, 16:24:44 UTC

=) Exactly, if she never tried, she'd never know what could have happened, the worst that could happen is he'd say no... which he didn't exactly. Thanks, glad you like!

pokecharm February 10 2009, 12:41:23 UTC

that made me kind of sad...but nicely done :)

angelps_7 February 10 2009, 16:25:22 UTC

haha sorry to make you sad, hopefully not too much though! :) Thanks!

teenage_hustler February 10 2009, 16:43:19 UTC

oh, i <3 this. it's pretty, and full of uncertainty, and yay.

angelps_7 February 14 2009, 20:41:03 UTC

Hehe I love, love your comment! Thank you so much!! =) Glad you like.