Foolish

[angelps_7]

Title: Foolish
Author: angelps_7
Rating: PG
Word Count: 596
Notes/Warning: This was written for Day 2 of the 'I Want the Fairy Tale' challenge. A bit on the sadder side, at least for me because I tend to write comedy and such.

Used 2 quotes: "I'm just a girl, standing in front of a boy, asking him to love her." and "No one has said "whoopsidaisies"

Comments

[reetinkerbell]

I'm glad Hermione tried, and still has hope. I'm sure Draco just needs to let it all sink in and realise he still feels the same - or more. :P At least that's what I'm hoping. :P

Very nice.

Only one thing; His smile brings a sense of comfort arou"No one has - I think maybe the word program you're using did something bad.

[angelps_7]

Oh no! I must fix that. Thanks for pointing it out, I didn't even notice! =)

[reetinkerbell]

The dangers of writing and posting all in one go - I've made oopsies similar to yours myself plenty of times to know I shouldn't, but it doesn't stop me from doing it still. :P

[angelps_7]

lols! It just happens, can't help it! haha no worries, and thank you again for pointing it out. You know when you read your own writing too many times while editing that your eyes just skip over parts? That's what happens to me sometimes =P

[reetinkerbell]

Oh I know what you mean. That's why I'm going to try and force myself to not post something I've written until at least one week has gone by. That way, when I reread it on the 7th day, I will hopefully have had enough distance from it to think of it new and catch those mistakes.

:P