DUET 4: imera and teenage_hustler

[ningloreth]

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Title: Rules of Dating
Author: imera
Rating:PG
Word Count: 2465 words
Summary: She doesn’t need to date, but that won’t stop Draco from setting her up with a young

Comments

[unseen1969]

If I were Hermione, I'd have smacked the annoying git. Sneaky Draco!

[lemonade8]

Awww, it took him a month to get up the nerve to do it, didn't it!! I really like his sneaky tactic.

[captainraychill]

Love the banter and their chemistry in this. I don't know why but this really, really made me laugh:

It wasn’t until two months after their agreement first took place that he sat down next to her, grinning like a madman. “You’ll never guess what I’ve found for you.”

“What, did you find another dead mouse?” she asked, barely taking her eyes off her work.

“No,” he replied, annoyed she would even ask such a thing. “I’ve found someone for you, and he’s quite willing to give you a mind blowing orgasm.”

Here he has finally worked up the courage to move forward with his cunning plan, and she brings up that dead rat. :)

Well done!

[ningloreth]

“Who said anything about dating? I’m talking about sex.”

LOL! I love all the banter -- D & H are both so spiky in this story -- but I especially love the way you shift the tone in the very last line, and leave us thinking that the relationship really has a chance.

[mister_otter]

It was so funny that Draco had a young date who thought he looked like 'some famous Muggle man.' I wonder if that might have been the actor who played him in the HP movies--provided he ages well, of course! ;) And I loved this line:
"Clearly, I can’t ask any of my friends to have sex with you, as most are still married, and the others are not into bossy girls.” Lol! Glad they wound up on a date together; I think that bodes well for a very compatible future.