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The Bracelet, Chapter 79

May 06, 2009 06:51

Title: The Bracelet
Author: AkashaTheKitty
Characters: Blaise Zabini, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Theodore Nott (whew)
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Hogwarts Years, Humor, Romance
Warnings: HBP Spoilers, although slightly incompatible.
Overall Rating: R
Summary: When Hermione Granger loses a bet ( Read more... )

rating: r, fic post, genre: romance, spoilers: hbp, era: hogwarts, genre: humour, genre: drama

Comments 22

meganmurphy1977 May 6 2009, 05:30:04 UTC

How do you do this? How? This was sweet and hot and romantic and erotic all at the same time. Simply amazing. Again, hotter than many of the more explicit NC-17 stuff out there.*

Only with her could it be like this. She may not want to be his last, but she'd always be his first. Nothing could ever change that now.

Aw. I think I love besotted Virgin!Draco. It's late, so I'm probably not phrasing this properly, but I love how he had such an innocent joy from the erotic pleasure he was experiencing. I so want a happy ending for him. With Hermione, if you please. :)

He could always hope.

When he woke up the next morning, she was gone.

And my heart is now breaking. Thanks a lot! ;)

*This comment in no way implies I want you to give up writing the more explicit stuff in the future. "In the Darkness..." still remains one of my tops!

akashathekitty May 6 2009, 10:00:50 UTC

Hahaha. I'm glad you approve of my not-that-explicit sex scene. I was very torn about how to do it because, frankly, I didn't want to change the rating based on a sex scene that takes place in chapter seventy-nine but I still wanted some hawtness to ensue. So, yeah, I toned it down a bit (which imo also fits the story better) and hoped it worked. XD

You're welcome ;) I'm always up for breaking a few hearts. ;)

cameronfrances May 14 2009, 08:32:51 UTC

Awesome. ♥

drazgurl24 May 6 2009, 05:43:58 UTC

AHHHH!!!! Why didn't she say it back?! Shame on you for letting it end like this...I need more! :)

akashathekitty May 6 2009, 10:12:52 UTC

Why she didn't say it back? O.o Well, I'm guessing she was too busy freaking out after he dropped that bomb on her. ;) And, also, I wouldn't assume she's quite there yet, or that if she were, she'd be willing to admit it. ;)

Glad you liked it. :D

kryptiq May 6 2009, 06:13:44 UTC

You are made of *WIN*.

And this chapter is made of *GOLD*.

This chapter has robbed me of the proper words to describe it. Wow. I'm very glad and squeeeful that he finally confesses his feelings to her.

Now, I shall pretend that last line didn't happen, because I'm sure it kinda broke poor Draco's heart.

akashathekitty May 6 2009, 10:16:40 UTC

But the REAL question is... what's Draco made of? ;D

I'm very glad you liked it :D And Draco's heart is toughening up a bit, so don't worry too much. He'll live. ;)

mister_otter May 6 2009, 10:35:44 UTC

This is phenomenal!! There's nothing, nothing better than "the pure need of the first time." Wherever you take it from here, however it all turns out, I love what you did with these last 3 chapters!

akashathekitty May 6 2009, 10:41:38 UTC

Thank you ♥

I wonder if anyone who didn't like it will even dare speak up. XD

feesvertes May 6 2009, 10:52:16 UTC

This makes me want to fall in love…

Great chapter with the insight into Draco's emotions.

akashathekitty May 6 2009, 11:02:26 UTC

Thank you ♥

Falling in love is awesome fun. Well, under the right circumstances anyway. It's been a while since it happened around these parts, tho. XD Been with the same guy for six years and all. ;)