The Bracelet, Chapter 79

[akashathekitty]

Title: The Bracelet
Author: AkashaTheKitty
Characters: Blaise Zabini, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Theodore Nott (whew)
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Hogwarts Years, Humor, Romance
Warnings: HBP Spoilers, although slightly incompatible.
Overall Rating: R
Summary: When Hermione Granger loses a bet

Comments

[painlessthrill]

Nuzzling her ear, he whispered, “I love you.”
OH GOD, DRACO. NO :(

When he woke up the next morning, she was gone.
*sulks a bit*

This chapter was as amazing as Draco+Hermione's making love :) I'm uberly glad that you didn't make it move super fast into Hermi saying: "I love you too" or anything, (despite me being very excited for that moment!). And now for the second best part after Dramione sex: the repercussions.

Hun, your writing is really just something else ♥.

[akashathekitty]

Yeah, he probably jumped the gun a little. XD

I think it would have been very out of character for her to have said it back in this instance, considering how she's feeling at this point and how little she trusts him.

Course, I do have a tendency to make them all walk in circles. XD

[dracos_damsel]

*deeeeeeep, calming breath* *fanns*

Okay, so you know I already loved you for the story itself - but after this chapter I'm just . . . undone! AMAZING! You write it so sexy, so hot, erotic and touching without being explicit - I feel like I'm learning a lot from you (writing style) by reading these past three chapters! Though nobody could ever immitate you - of that I'm sure!

Besides, I feel more than a little naughty for reading this intense chapter while people are around me in the class room! lol

No, honestly; WOW. Draco is just - I mean, it doesn't get any more emotional for him than that, right? For him, who's such an emotionally withdrawn character, to realize and voice this amazing feeling that he has for her is beyond sweet (for lack of better word).
And that last line just killed me.

Can't wait to see how this will continue! Hopefully Hermione will realize one day soon just what she could/will/does feel for Draco! Don't leave us and him that heartbroken!

*loves you to pieces* <3

[akashathekitty]

Thank you ♥ I worked really, really hard on these chapters. There were even occasional freakouts and vows to drop writing altogether. XD

And, yeah, it was very highly emotional for him. This whole thing has been an exercise in feeling for him. XD

*smooooooooochies* ♥

[deirdre_shojo]

Perfect. Just Perfect.

Hot.Romantic.Dramatic.

I don't have the words with me right now.

[silverotter1]

You. Are. A. ROCK STAR!!!!

I'm seriously on a high from the nice little endorphin release your chapter gave me. *sways to the happy music in my head*

The intimate scene was expertly done. All the feelings and emotions: excitement, anticipation, trepidation, pure pleasure... it's all in there. And in a non-explicit way, yet, its still VERY erotic. SO great. I just can't say enough. Well-Done, Kitty!

[skybound2]

I have no words to express what this chapter did to me. But I felt I should leave a comment to let you know you've left me completely speechless. Now, if you'll pardon me, I think I need to go re-read this chapter about 6 more times ;-P