Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance Fight! Anger! Pain!
anonymous
August 23 2012, 19:11:34 UTC
After they had sex. They get into a huge fight about magic (open for your own ideas) and their non-existing relationship. Lots of angry, ugly words are exchanged. Name-calling, accusation, deliberately trying to hurt one another's feelings, feeding of each others anger etc.
Fenris calls Hawke an abomination, she retaliated with something equally hurtful. She feels used for sex and tells Fenris to go fuck some whores (or Isabella, she's jealous of her) instead. That kind of stuff. Heartbreaking and lotsa hurt/angst please!! No happy ending necessary!
Re: Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance Fight! Anger! Pain!
anonymous
September 2 2012, 23:27:36 UTC
Ow. I want this. This prompt is similar to a story I have been planning to write. I'm curious to see what the other A!A above might do with this prompt although I might take a shot at it too, even if just a short fill (longer than mini fill but not long).
Close 1a/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 02:13:09 UTC
A!A’s Notes: ~Bites nails~ I’m not the original A!A with a potential idea, but when I saw this prompt a story happened. I hope that original A!A also decides to write a fill too
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Re: Close 1b/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 02:14:29 UTC
No more teasing happens this time. No sucking at her nipples until the skin around them pebbles and hurts. Fenris is braced above her, his hip working a steady rhythm that she matches. A drip of sweat falls from the tip of his nose to her cheek. His breath huffs, hot and close until it catches. She grasps his upper arm, feeling the muscle burn and flex. A growl in the back of his throat. His eyelids lower. Finally, he’s letting go of his control
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Re: Close 1c/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 02:15:33 UTC
Marian doesn’t understand. Fenris has always been the one to initiate, just like he had initiated their act of sex more than an hour ago. “Let’s try to work through this.” Her words are cautious. “Fenris, that’s not how I see things.”
He raises his hand, finger shaking as he points at her. “Do not think you can ensnare me the same way as Denarius! I will not allow it
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Re: Close 1d/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 02:16:43 UTC
Suddenly Marian saw what had been right before her eyes since all this time. “Three years ago, you said that in me you had finally found a person of substance. Did you think you could buy protection through flattery and flirtations? Tell me, Fenris, you said that you grew fond of the fog warriors because they were free with their affections. They gave you physical pleasures and you accepted it. You shared pleasure of the flesh with them, didn’t you? At least, until Denarius told you to slaughter them” Her voice shakes. “Did you enjoy pleasuring Denarius? Did he ever pleasure you? Did you enjoy his affections
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Re: Close 1d/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 22:43:05 UTC
DEAR WRITER ANON
I LOVE YOU. This is almost exactly what I imagined. You made it even better and darker though and I loved every single line. Now I regret my prompt because I haz a sad :[
I would love to read more of this!! But don't feel rushed or obliged to anything and I thank you so much for your fill.
Re: Close 1d/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 14 2012, 23:55:00 UTC
HI OP!
YAY! Anon is happy you liked the story and that it was close to what you imagined, but I think we *both* need to have a giant group hug on a fluffy prompt elsewhere in the meme because I was sooooooo full of sad when I finally finished writing this. :[
I can sometimes be a slow writer/updater but I'll continue. :)
Fenris calls Hawke an abomination, she retaliated with something equally hurtful. She feels used for sex and tells Fenris to go fuck some whores (or Isabella, she's jealous of her) instead. That kind of stuff. Heartbreaking and lotsa hurt/angst please!! No happy ending necessary!
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He raises his hand, finger shaking as he points at her. “Do not think you can ensnare me the same way as Denarius! I will not allow it ( ... )
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I LOVE YOU. This is almost exactly what I imagined. You made it even better and darker though and I loved every single line. Now I regret my prompt because I haz a sad :[
I would love to read more of this!! But don't feel rushed or obliged to anything and I thank you so much for your fill.
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YAY! Anon is happy you liked the story and that it was close to what you imagined, but I think we *both* need to have a giant group hug on a fluffy prompt elsewhere in the meme because I was sooooooo full of sad when I finally finished writing this. :[
I can sometimes be a slow writer/updater but I'll continue. :)
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