Re: Close 1d/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 02:16:43 UTC
Suddenly Marian saw what had been right before her eyes since all this time. “Three years ago, you said that in me you had finally found a person of substance. Did you think you could buy protection through flattery and flirtations? Tell me, Fenris, you said that you grew fond of the fog warriors because they were free with their affections. They gave you physical pleasures and you accepted it. You shared pleasure of the flesh with them, didn’t you? At least, until Denarius told you to slaughter them” Her voice shakes. “Did you enjoy pleasuring Denarius? Did he ever pleasure you? Did you enjoy his affections?”
“Shut your mouth!”
“Did you flatter Denarius? Did you flirt?”
“Stop!”
“You tried to compare me to him, but I am not your master.”
The rage builds up in him all once, like a sudden storm. He snatches a vase from the mantelpiece and cocks his arm, taking aim at her. She braces, her body rigid, her face a mask of stone. His arm jerks. An instant later the vase crashes against the side of her wardrobe. Smashed porcelain shards rain onto the tile floor.
Not once does Marian flinch.
Fenris looks away. His shoulders sag as he stoops down to gather his clothes. He dresses in silence.
“All of this… It’s just… It’s just too much for me.” He sounds broken. All the purpose and anger run out him like dishwater dumped in an alley. “What we did made me remember my life from before. I cannot stay.”
Re: Close 1d/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 13 2012, 22:43:05 UTC
DEAR WRITER ANON
I LOVE YOU. This is almost exactly what I imagined. You made it even better and darker though and I loved every single line. Now I regret my prompt because I haz a sad :[
I would love to read more of this!! But don't feel rushed or obliged to anything and I thank you so much for your fill.
Re: Close 1d/? (Fenris/F!Mage!Hawke Rivalmance)
anonymous
September 14 2012, 23:55:00 UTC
HI OP!
YAY! Anon is happy you liked the story and that it was close to what you imagined, but I think we *both* need to have a giant group hug on a fluffy prompt elsewhere in the meme because I was sooooooo full of sad when I finally finished writing this. :[
I can sometimes be a slow writer/updater but I'll continue. :)
“Shut your mouth!”
“Did you flatter Denarius? Did you flirt?”
“Stop!”
“You tried to compare me to him, but I am not your master.”
The rage builds up in him all once, like a sudden storm. He snatches a vase from the mantelpiece and cocks his arm, taking aim at her. She braces, her body rigid, her face a mask of stone. His arm jerks. An instant later the vase crashes against the side of her wardrobe. Smashed porcelain shards rain onto the tile floor.
Not once does Marian flinch.
Fenris looks away. His shoulders sag as he stoops down to gather his clothes. He dresses in silence.
“All of this… It’s just… It’s just too much for me.” He sounds broken. All the purpose and anger run out him like dishwater dumped in an alley. “What we did made me remember my life from before. I cannot stay.”
She says nothing as she watches him go.
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I LOVE YOU. This is almost exactly what I imagined. You made it even better and darker though and I loved every single line. Now I regret my prompt because I haz a sad :[
I would love to read more of this!! But don't feel rushed or obliged to anything and I thank you so much for your fill.
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YAY! Anon is happy you liked the story and that it was close to what you imagined, but I think we *both* need to have a giant group hug on a fluffy prompt elsewhere in the meme because I was sooooooo full of sad when I finally finished writing this. :[
I can sometimes be a slow writer/updater but I'll continue. :)
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