SG1 writing exercise: Unlooked-for Gift

Jul 06, 2008 14:43

Unlooked-for Gift
Jack/Daniel, soft NC-17, 2700 words.
No beta; please tell me if I have spinach in my teeth.

Jack reached out to straighten the shoulders of Daniel's tac vest, fix a buckle. They were easy, familiar touches, the kind he could get away with in front of SG-6 and SG-15 there in the gate room, because he'd always touched Daniel like ( Read more... )

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dragojustine July 7 2008, 22:20:47 UTC
poised? Wow. *blushes* Thank you.

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rodneyscat July 7 2008, 15:08:45 UTC
Good grief, sweet jesus, I sure hope I'm not offending anyone but, good god almighty. I'm feeling like Jack here now. Oh my. That hit one of my kinks so. damn. hard.

I'm here through princessofg. I owe her, as per usual.

Thanks for sharing this.

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dragojustine July 7 2008, 22:21:22 UTC
No offense at all! I have no shame when it comes to TMI :) Yaay for getting your kink buttons hit.

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janedavitt July 7 2008, 15:19:53 UTC
Jack's desperation and need and Daniel's teasing was sublime. If it's teasing when he's willing to make good on every delicious word :-)

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dragojustine July 7 2008, 22:30:42 UTC
Oh, and he is *absolutely* willing to make good :) I'm glad you liked.

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tresa_cho July 7 2008, 17:30:29 UTC
Lovely. I love the flashback. Brilliant.

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dragojustine July 7 2008, 22:31:03 UTC
I'm glad it worked for you!

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dragojustine July 7 2008, 22:33:22 UTC
I'm so glad you liked. *g*

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