SG1 Ficlet: Hell of a Sight

Jun 16, 2008 08:48

Hell of a Sight
SG1 1800 words PWP
Jack/Daniel. Well, Daniel/Jack, really.
Rating: porn porn porn porn porn.
Warnings: More than a little bit of power-exchange d/s dynamic, but not really any kinky trappings to go with it. No spoilers.
AN: This is so ludicrously self-indulgent. Also? Porn in past tense is hard. Thanks to amara_m for the look- ( Read more... )

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whimsicalwhims June 16 2008, 17:19:08 UTC
Oh, my. This was amazing.

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dragojustine June 17 2008, 00:42:18 UTC
Aw, thanks!

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writinginct June 16 2008, 17:38:09 UTC
Wow...just wow...

You managed to get Bottom!Jack and Kinky!Daniel to work together in a piece that's not only steaming hot and in character, but has that edge of humor that's always circling around them.

Nice job ^_^

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dragojustine June 17 2008, 00:42:31 UTC
I'm so glad you think so!

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dragojustine June 17 2008, 01:03:43 UTC
Thanks. I hope to!

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tejas June 16 2008, 17:42:12 UTC
Oh, *damn*! That was hot! And the laugh at the end was perfect!

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dragojustine June 17 2008, 01:04:00 UTC
Oh man, I'm glad you think so.

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hilarytamar June 16 2008, 17:50:32 UTC
This is... remarkable. Um. No, wait, I'll see that 'remarkable' & raise it a 'stunning'. I only wish my brain wasn't off-line, so that I could point to what I especially liked in hopes of bribing encouraging you to write more of it. The characterization was superb & the porn was fabulous, and I can't decide which was better. This is not a problem I'm often confronted with, you know?

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dragojustine June 17 2008, 01:04:34 UTC
Yeah, that is one of the somewhat rarer problems of fanfic porn... I'm so glad you liked!

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