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dragojustine

SG1 Ficlet: Hell of a Sight

Jun 16, 2008 08:48

Hell of a Sight
SG1 1800 words PWP
Jack/Daniel. Well, Daniel/Jack, really.
Rating: porn porn porn porn porn.
Warnings: More than a little bit of power-exchange d/s dynamic, but not really any kinky trappings to go with it. No spoilers.
AN: This is so ludicrously self-indulgent. Also? Porn in past tense is hard. Thanks to amara_m for the look- ( Read more... )

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Comments 138

gatewhale June 16 2008, 14:56:50 UTC

very very very very very very ... did I mentiont very ? yea I did I think ... very .. oh did it again ... VERY hot * grins *

dragojustine June 16 2008, 15:06:47 UTC

I'm so glad!

sweeneybird June 16 2008, 15:17:57 UTC

so often porn is either hot or in character - this was both to the nth degree, especially the last line. Well played!

dragojustine June 17 2008, 00:12:24 UTC

Oh, wow- I'm so glad, thanks

darsynia June 16 2008, 15:34:07 UTC

“Jack, your whole body just *shook* at that. That was amazing.”

Oh, crazy hot, that. This was sublime, and there's really nothing sexier than characterization in porn! I feel like I should be paying you right now, or something. *fans self*

dragojustine June 17 2008, 00:13:32 UTC

Heehee. Aw, baby, was it good for you too?

I'm so glad you liked.

advection June 16 2008, 15:47:19 UTC

Love all the layers of Jack observing Daniel observe him, and the anthropological detachment and expertise is a very hot thing indeed. And the last two lines left me grinning and happy in the best way. :-)

dragojustine June 16 2008, 16:01:55 UTC

Um- WOW. This- okay, I'm just going to fangirl wildly at you for a minute, so have patience ( ... )

green_grrl June 16 2008, 16:23:09 UTC

Funny you should say this, because I was just thinking I haven't read a PWP so in character and so hot since paian's Slipping. :-)

advection June 16 2008, 21:15:14 UTC

I'm feeling all blushy and shy now too! I'm so happy that you read and liked those fics, and so happy that you wrote this. I also really hope you get the urge to write more in this fandom and especially this pairing, and you know you'll have a ravenous audience if you do *g*, but this is deliciously satisfying, and any inspiration my fic provided just makes me that much more delighted over it. Yay, and thanks for saying!

green_grrl June 16 2008, 16:17:43 UTC

Holy christ, this is fantastic! Such a fabulously written piece of character study perfectly meshed with steaming hot porn. I'll be in my bunk for a while ...

dragojustine June 17 2008, 00:14:10 UTC

Yaay! Thanks