FIC: His to Command (NC-17)

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Title: His to Command
Author: gracerene
Prompt: #65
Summary: Harry's new hobby provides some interesting inspiration.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): established relationship, background Ron/Hermione, blindfolds, light D/s, light bondage, failed sexperiments, blowjobs, anal sex
Word Count: ~3,700
Author's Notes: I wanted an appropriately dramatic title to go with

Comments

[leontinabowie]

I really enjoyed this story ♥

I've read quite a lot of hardcore BDSM stories, so it will nice to see a more light-hearted approach to it. I loved their relationship, how they were willing to try out new things but not take it too seriously. It felt very natural between them :)

[gracerene]

Thank you so much! I'm a huge fan of D/s type fics, but I thought I'd play around with something a little more playful this time around. :)

[dicta_contrion]

This was fab! The way you handled the romance novels was funny and endearing, and I love that you kept the familiarity in H/D's relationship. It's great to see a story where they're not Sex Geniuses(tm) on the first go, and to see them handling mishaps with humor and care and resilience, and finding a really great, natural way to compromise on something that works for them both. And to see a story where the dom isn't perfectly confident and in character! All of those moments where one or the other of them was uncertain or where they started laughing, all of that, made it feel even more realistic and made it even easier to see the closeness and intimacy between then. And it was hot and funny, too! Thanks for a great read!

[gracerene]

Thanks so much, hon! As much as I adore a slick, confident Dom!Draco, I had fun working with a more playful and awkward setting as they figure things out. I'm glad their closeness and the trust and love between them was evident. :)

[birdsofshore]

I LOVE the idea of Harry and Hermione reading trashy romances. The bit where you pointed out all the flaws and then said "Harry couldn't stop reading them," was so spot on! That was very entertaining, and then their first tentative forays into kinkiness were refreshingly cack handed. I do love Draco as a Dommy sex god, but this was more realistic!

I liked the way they kept trying until they found something that clicked. There was a lot of love and trust between them to be able to experiment like that. I found it really heart-warming actually! Thanks, MA.

[gracerene]

Thanks so much, Birds! I'm glad you liked the line about the romance flaws and their addictive qualities. :D

You know I like my Dommy sex god Draco, so I figured I should push myself a bit and try something different. :)

[dracogotgame]

Thoroughly enjoyable! Loved the experimentations and awkward first encounters. Both boys were so sweet and so obviously, hopelessly in love...this was really fun to read :)

[gracerene]

Thanks so much! :D

[capitu]

GOD, I love this so, so much! :D Wee! I love their relationship, I can see how amazing they are together, how much they love each other. I love seeing Harry so eager to please, trying to be sexy, oh my god, that they can laugh about what went wrong: LOVE ♥♥♥

I love that this is how they try at first, that it isn't everything perfect from the go, but they keep trying, seeing what works for them, testing and still laughing and then it gets intense and perfect in their way, it's fantastic.

I love Harry realising what he misses once he can't touch Draco, and how it enlightens his other senses. This part:

He'd never realised how much his hands came into play during sex. Not only for the obvious things, like caressing and wanking, but also for more subtle guidance and control.

I think maybe Harry then realised exactly how he's submitting, and how thrilled he is to just take his pleasure as given. God, delicious.

Perfect, I love everything about this. <3333

[gracerene]

Awww, you are just the best! I'm so thrilled you liked this one so much! Thanks again for all your help with it! <3