FIC: His to Command (NC-17)

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Title: His to Command
Author: gracerene
Prompt: #65
Summary: Harry's new hobby provides some interesting inspiration.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): established relationship, background Ron/Hermione, blindfolds, light D/s, light bondage, failed sexperiments, blowjobs, anal sex
Word Count: ~3,700
Author's Notes: I wanted an appropriately dramatic title to go with

Comments

[shiftylinguini]

Oh, I enjoyed this so much MA!!! Loved the take on D/s and Harry's curiosity - and the dynamic between them was wonderful.

Harry falling off the bed while trying to be sexy had me smiling like an idiot, and I loved how they explored, and kept trying - I'm a big, big sucker for reading these two trying new things in a safe environment, and I just really bloody adore realistic sex complete with all the Bits That Go Wrong, and this just ticked so many boxes for me.

This was exactly what I was in the mood for, so thank you for being brilliant and writing this!

<3

[gracerene]

Thanks, darling! I'm glad you liked Harry falling off the bed, that was my favorite part. :D

[shiftylinguini]

oooohhh, it was you!!!! Eeee, yes I loved that bit. I snort laughed. You write such a charming Harry, and your Draco...there's something so warm about him. I love it.

xxx

[ani_mage]

This fic was just delightful! I laughed a lot reading this story. A few people mentioned how great these lines are-“ The plots were flimsy at best, the writing was florid, and Harry had never realised just how many euphemisms for the male anatomy one could come up with. Harry couldn’t stop reading them”-but I thought I’d say again how funny this whole part was. I loved the idea of Ron, Hermione, Harry, and Draco all vacationing together. And I also really appreciated the fact that the romantic partners in the stories that Harry reads are so varied, and included lesbian, gay, and bisexual relationships. I think my favorite part of the story was the “sir” section. Draco’s attempts not to laugh just felt like such a real reaction to the situation, and how sometimes things that are hot in literature have different connotations in the real world. Thanks for a great story, MA!

[gracerene]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you picked up on and enjoyed the various types of romance novels--I purposefully wanted to include different kinds of relationships. :)

And that you enjoyed the sir section so much! I totally find the "sir" thing hot in fics, but sometimes I think about how making that change would actually work in a relationship, and I figured sometimes it's got to be really fucking weird. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and for such a lovely comment! :D

[akira_tm]

I really really enjoyed this! ♥
Poor Harry's head... *hug him*

I love how Draco take care of Harry and how he offer to watch Star Wars xD
yum yum!

[gracerene]

Thank you! <3

[frnklymrshnkly]

I LOVE that you incorporated humour into this story. All of the little hiccups and fails along the way made it seem utterly genuine to me, and actually hotter for it. <3

[gracerene]

Thanks so much! I'm glad the humor enhanced the hotness for you. :)

[articcat621]

Oh my god. This was hilarious and awkward and hot and just so wonderful. A completely realistic portrayal of a couple exploring different things. Nicely done <3

[gracerene]

Thank you so much! :)