Title: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride)
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# 15 Summary: Draco and Harry are new Auror partners. It's a bit dull. Until they finally see some spell action and things get a lot more interesting (in Draco's pants).
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): (highlight for details): *sex in semi-public places, Hermione/Pansy/Ron*
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The writing was gorgeous, and I love the little details about their life that you added in--the other probationary Aurors, the stupid stake-outs that they were fed up with, the Hermione/Ron/Pansy threesome (UGH. "It's nothing Ron and I can't handle." Hermione was spot on.)
Favorite part had to be:
"Why haven't we stopped?" Potter asked.
Draco bore down on him. He cast a privacy spell.
"Did you tell Ernie he could?"
"You Apparated. Onto a moving Knight Bus."
THAT. Draco was just SO TURNED ON BY THAT that he couldn't handle himself, even after they hadn't slept together for three months! And Harry takes it, takes it all, and lets Draco fuck him UGHHH you are wonderful, MA!
I also really like the Draco + Hermione friendship. That's one of my favorite things.
Brilliant first fic of the fest <3
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They both being Aurors made me very happy, and having 13k of Auror fic <3
The 'nimbus formation' also made me ridiculously happy, I pictured them flying, all super serious in their battle formation :D
And the special Portkeys! I'm such a sucker for 'new' magical inventions in fic.
And powerful!Harry! *swoon* (except for Potions, so very canon :D)
Ahahaha, Harry going all crafty with Incarcerous art :D Too funny!
Oh, that kiss! And then the blowjob! I think I was even more surprised than Draco was (and equally overheated)! Hot, hot, hot!
"You still want to shag the shit out of him, don't you?"
YES! I want that too! Draco, don't give up on us, do your duty :D
"...And that he knelt beautifully..."
NNNHG
"You'll Splinch your prick off"Ahahahaha! Draco, stop him! Although, I bet Draco finds it ridiculously attractive when Harry manages to Apparate onto the bus, perhaps being a little bit of a sucker for powerful!Harry? (it takes one to know one *cough ( ... )
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Hot sex! I was with Harry, wondering if it was just the thrill of the Auror work, but there was clearly a whole lot of sexual tension. Harry demanding affection "Spoon me, you arse," was funny, sweet, and sad. So perfect.
I loved Harry calling him a coward. That whole awkward morning after felt so realistic.
The Hermione/Draco dialogue was great! First off, I love that his solution was to contact her instead of Harry. But mainly I just enjoyed how awkward it was and how cool and composed Hermione was.
Draco rushing off to find Harry! So romantic. It got my adrenaline going and got me caught up in the moment. I loved Harry laughing at the tea comment and then realising Draco is sincere.
Ron was so funny about the feet. *snorts* Well done, Ron. We validate you.
So yeah, I guess I wanted to say I really enjoyed this. *nods*
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