FIC: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride) (NC-17)

Apr 01, 2015 18:10

Title: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride)
Author: lumosed_quill
Prompt: # 15
Summary: Draco and Harry are new Auror partners. It's a bit dull. Until they finally see some spell action and things get a lot more interesting (in Draco's pants).
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): (highlight for details): *sex in semi-public places, Hermione/Pansy/Ron*
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rating: nc-17, type: fic, author: lumosed_quill, fic length: medium, [admin] fest-2015

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alpha_exodus April 2 2015, 22:04:59 UTC
First of all, THIS WAS SOOO HOT OH MY GOODNESS. The sex was perfect and lovely and you somehow managed to suggest UST throughout almost the entire fic even when they were actively sleeping together?? Which was amazing.

The writing was gorgeous, and I love the little details about their life that you added in--the other probationary Aurors, the stupid stake-outs that they were fed up with, the Hermione/Ron/Pansy threesome (UGH. "It's nothing Ron and I can't handle." Hermione was spot on.)

Favorite part had to be:
"Why haven't we stopped?" Potter asked.
Draco bore down on him. He cast a privacy spell.
"Did you tell Ernie he could?"
"You Apparated. Onto a moving Knight Bus."

THAT. Draco was just SO TURNED ON BY THAT that he couldn't handle himself, even after they hadn't slept together for three months! And Harry takes it, takes it all, and lets Draco fuck him UGHHH you are wonderful, MA!

I also really like the Draco + Hermione friendship. That's one of my favorite things.

Brilliant first fic of the fest <3

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lq_traintracks May 12 2015, 15:35:21 UTC
Okay, I'm just gonna print this out with a really large font and wallpaper my new apartment with this comment. \o/ LOL! Thank you so, so much!

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alpha_exodus May 18 2015, 02:10:50 UTC
Hehe you are most definitely welcome!! (:

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amorette April 3 2015, 05:41:27 UTC
This was a lovely story! I really enjoyed seeing Draco get all turned on at how tough and Auror-like Harry was during missions :D. And then not being able to keep his hands off him. That was a fabulous smut-filled adventure. I also particularly loved Pansy being in a sort of polyamorous relationship w Hermione and Ron, how fun and different! My favorite bit was reading how Draco got so worried about Harry in the end because it was sweet and passionate, and that last kiss was to die for!! Wonderful story.

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lq_traintracks May 12 2015, 15:37:05 UTC
Awwww, thank you so much!!! :-D

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barefacedbandit April 3 2015, 09:39:01 UTC
Oh my, I read this last night and spontaneously combusted at all the hotness. It is amazing and sexy and amazingly sexy. My personal favourite bit is those sly touches in the pub, under everyone's noses. Oh. My. Rowling. Seriously, that was the sexiest damn thing ever. Okay that and the blow job in the alley with Harry wanking himself off at the same time (nnnnnng). And the Knight Bus (guuuuuuuhhhhh). And then... okay fine, all the sexy bits were ridiculously hot. Massive kudos, MA. Also, I cannot wait for the adrenaline-filled hot and smutty sequel :D

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lq_traintracks May 12 2015, 15:38:27 UTC
Omg, thank you!!! What a wonderful comment to get! The pub is my favorite bit as well, so I really appreciate knowing that! :-DDD

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cabinetcaligari April 3 2015, 10:40:54 UTC
What a delicious fic this was!!
They both being Aurors made me very happy, and having 13k of Auror fic <3
The 'nimbus formation' also made me ridiculously happy, I pictured them flying, all super serious in their battle formation :D
And the special Portkeys! I'm such a sucker for 'new' magical inventions in fic.
And powerful!Harry! *swoon* (except for Potions, so very canon :D)
Ahahaha, Harry going all crafty with Incarcerous art :D Too funny!

Oh, that kiss! And then the blowjob! I think I was even more surprised than Draco was (and equally overheated)! Hot, hot, hot!

"You still want to shag the shit out of him, don't you?"
YES! I want that too! Draco, don't give up on us, do your duty :D

"...And that he knelt beautifully..."
NNNHG

"You'll Splinch your prick off"Ahahahaha! Draco, stop him! Although, I bet Draco finds it ridiculously attractive when Harry manages to Apparate onto the bus, perhaps being a little bit of a sucker for powerful!Harry? (it takes one to know one *cough ( ... )

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fantasyfiend09 April 4 2015, 03:45:28 UTC
I'm reading this going "oh yeah! I forgot to mention that I liked that, too!" I'm glad you were so thorough.

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lq_traintracks May 12 2015, 15:42:24 UTC
What a GLORIOUS comment! I'm so touched by it. Thank you SO MUCH. <33

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lq_traintracks June 7 2015, 16:33:39 UTC
Omg, I missed a WHOLE BIG BUNCH of comments here!!!! ACK!!! Oh! This is so wonderful to see! Thank you so so much! That you took the time to copy and paste your favorite parts... <3! Seriously, I'm so blown away. Thank you!!!

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fantasyfiend09 April 4 2015, 03:43:43 UTC
This was so great!! I love the dialogue and their dynamic right from the beginning.

Hot sex! I was with Harry, wondering if it was just the thrill of the Auror work, but there was clearly a whole lot of sexual tension. Harry demanding affection "Spoon me, you arse," was funny, sweet, and sad. So perfect.

I loved Harry calling him a coward. That whole awkward morning after felt so realistic.

The Hermione/Draco dialogue was great! First off, I love that his solution was to contact her instead of Harry. But mainly I just enjoyed how awkward it was and how cool and composed Hermione was.

Draco rushing off to find Harry! So romantic. It got my adrenaline going and got me caught up in the moment. I loved Harry laughing at the tea comment and then realising Draco is sincere.

Ron was so funny about the feet. *snorts* Well done, Ron. We validate you.

So yeah, I guess I wanted to say I really enjoyed this. *nods*

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lq_traintracks May 12 2015, 15:44:15 UTC
Thank you so much! I smiled all the way through reading your comment! :-D

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