FIC: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride) (NC-17)

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Title: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride)
Author: lumosed_quill
Prompt: # 15
Summary: Draco and Harry are new Auror partners. It's a bit dull. Until they finally see some spell action and things get a lot more interesting (in Draco's pants).
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): (highlight for details): *sex in semi-public places, Hermione/Pansy/Ron*

Comments

[cabinetcaligari]

What a delicious fic this was!!
They both being Aurors made me very happy, and having 13k of Auror fic <3
The 'nimbus formation' also made me ridiculously happy, I pictured them flying, all super serious in their battle formation :D
And the special Portkeys! I'm such a sucker for 'new' magical inventions in fic.
And powerful!Harry! *swoon* (except for Potions, so very canon :D)
Ahahaha, Harry going all crafty with Incarcerous art :D Too funny!

Oh, that kiss! And then the blowjob! I think I was even more surprised than Draco was (and equally overheated)! Hot, hot, hot!

"You still want to shag the shit out of him, don't you?"
YES! I want that too! Draco, don't give up on us, do your duty :D

"...And that he knelt beautifully..."
NNNHG

"You'll Splinch your prick off"
Ahahahaha! Draco, stop him! Although, I bet Draco finds it ridiculously attractive when Harry manages to Apparate onto the bus, perhaps being a little bit of a sucker for powerful!Harry? (it takes one to know one *cough*)

And YES, I love this Draco, just letting his rush of adrenaline guide him and ... and fucking him on the bus? JFC on a bread stick, that was ridiculously hot! And Harry preparing himself, no fussing with fingers, but just BAM, Draco entering him in one swift move, and fucking Harry within an inch of his life :D

"Dear Salazar, he'd just fucked Harry Potter"
Yes Draco, you did it! Proud of you :D

"Do you bake?"
Ahahahaha, go Draco! I suddenly empathize so much with your Draco, this could be me attempting to flirt :D (although I never catched such a glorious specimen as your Harry.)

"Nice shoes. Fancy a fuck?"
*swoon* Oh god, your Harry is smooth as fuck! I love how he is such a dominant, strong-willed bottom, it feels like technically Draco's topping, but emotionally, it is Harry who's taking the lead here. Wonderful dynamics, and so very fitting for the two characters you create here <3 Oh, and that finger-fucking-with-blowjob is ridiculously hot, too.

And oh Jesus, I just barely recovered from that crazy hot scene with Harry riding Draco, and then you hit us with the rimming scene! O_o That may or may not be the hottest rimming scene I've ever read... <3

And your Hermione is such a great character here! I love how Draco's mature enough to call her and treat her like an adult and not hostile as he does in the books (and often in fiction). And the love for Harry that's shining through her words, and understanding, and keeping it simple for Draco because she gets it so much more than he does, and also gets that Draco doesn't really get it.. I love your side characters, they're so loveable and believable and it makes me so happy for Harry and Draco to know they have these people around :)

"Oi!"
Ahahaha Ron, deliciously ignorant Ron! :D

And then crying Draco! And Draco denying he'd cried in front of everybody, because Harry was mortally wounded ... I'm giggling AND emotionally molten. And Harry, stop whining and just go drink tea with Malfoy, because tea's ALWAYS the answer. Do it.

"I think you're all concussed" HAHAHAHA, I think concussed!Ron is my new favourite Ron :D

Thank you so much for this wonderful story, MA! I just had to make this ridiculously long comment because I loved EVERYTHING and really wanted to tell you, but I also love love love how you let them shag throughout the story, and with all this UET (unresolved emotional tension, is that a thing? From now on, it is) you build a beautiful story. The title made more and more sense while I was getting further into the story, and I think it's perfectly chosen. I love how your Draco tops, but your equally strong Harry is 'topping' within the emotional aspects of the story, which makes it a wonderful balance between these strong characters you've created. <333

edited because the quotations were a mess

[fantasyfiend09]

I'm reading this going "oh yeah! I forgot to mention that I liked that, too!" I'm glad you were so thorough.

[lq_traintracks]

What a GLORIOUS comment! I'm so touched by it. Thank you SO MUCH. <33

[lq_traintracks]

Omg, I missed a WHOLE BIG BUNCH of comments here!!!! ACK!!! Oh! This is so wonderful to see! Thank you so so much! That you took the time to copy and paste your favorite parts... <3! Seriously, I'm so blown away. Thank you!!!