FIC: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride) (NC-17)

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Title: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride)
Author: lumosed_quill
Prompt: # 15
Summary: Draco and Harry are new Auror partners. It's a bit dull. Until they finally see some spell action and things get a lot more interesting (in Draco's pants).
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): (highlight for details): *sex in semi-public places, Hermione/Pansy/Ron*

Comments

[gracerene]

Yes! Lunch break plans! I AM SO EXCITED! :D

[gracerene]

Oh that was so good! Such a fabulous first fic to start with (and not just because it was my prompt!).

I loved your Draco here, his little rebellions against his father/upbringing with the crazy flat and muggle alcohol were great. I really enjoyed seeing his feelings for Harry develop, and how he sort of purposefully wouldn't let himself see or acknowledge the depth of those feelings, and what it all meant.

And the sex! So much sex and it was all so hot and just kdjvo;qeihf;sd! Filthy bathroom sex, and blowjobs under tables and in alley ways and fucking against windows! And just the perfect blend of sexiness and emotion.

So glad that Draco quickly got over his hangups, and I love that he owled Hermione. I have such a soft spot for Draco/Hermione friendships. And then romantic kissing in St Mungos! Just so great. :D

Oh, and that background Pansy/Hermione/Ron was so great! I loved Ron and Pansy's auror partnership and banter, and Hermione was fabulous as always.

Basically this was awesome and I loved it. <3

[lq_traintracks]

Thank you, Grace! You always give such amazing prompts, and I couldn't resist this one. :-D I'm thrilled you liked it!!!

[birdsofshore]

[Rambly comment of flail]
"What is this, a craft project?"

OMG, MA. I love you. I love your Draco, too. I love their banter, the spark between them. I REALLY love Harry sucking Draco off while having a wank and then them being all 'back to business' again, with Draco's legs wobbling. :DD

So many lovely lines. I did like eased the irksome knot there with Harry Potter's name on it.

God, Draco watching it in the Pensieve. MMMMMM. And then this is like a FESTIVAL of semi-public sex. I feel like you're playing our tune ;) Harry's arse against the window of the Knight Bus was hilarious and hot. I loved the way they work together, the excitement and thrill of the scenes. It seemed utterly believable they would both blow off tension like that afterwards. They'd nearly crashed into the Thames, and Draco's response was to get a raging erection. PERFECTLY reasonable, I'd say.

I told you I liked your shoes. Put out already. Hee!

Harry spurring Draco on in the bathroom was HOT as HOT and then this:

Draco had rolled up his shirt sleeves, and he realised as Potter

[lq_traintracks]

Oh, your comment makes me flail! :-DDD I love all the quoty bits, THANK YOU!!! I'm so happy you liked all the parts that weren't the semi-public sex (because it's hard to mess up semi-public sex really), so I'm really happy to hear about all those. I think Draco and Harry in the booth after the loo might be *my* favorite part, so I'm really pleased you picked that out specifically... those lines specifically, too. <3

I'm super happy you liked Hermione and Draco in this! And I'm thrilled you quoted Ron near the end, because I was hooting over him myself!

Bless you for this awesome comment, dear!

[capitu]

Aw man, this fic!! THIS FIC. :D

I loved it. I just, I loved everything about it. I love the MOMENTS between them.

There were all these MOMENTS, you know?

Like, the first, when Draco's fucking sniffing the air that smelled of Harry and he's just there, bored out of head sniffing and they are bickering and it's perfect, and then, they are all, "Go on, Potter. I dare you." and that KISS, I want to die a little. :D

And it's everything like that. It's intense and crazy and so, so delicious.

And it kills me that Draco doesn't have a name for it, it's like, he doesn't realise there an it to name but then he thinks stuff like,

He made to dust non-existent crumbs off the countertop, half wishing he'd unpacked his Pensieve already so he could prove to her exactly what kind of saint Potter really was - and that he knelt beautifully.
Merlin, so beautifully.

And how unabashedly he'd sucked Draco's cock… the fervent heat of him… those eyes looking up, his own hand flying between his legs…

And

And how could that ever possibly be true

[lq_traintracks]

Awwwww, I love what you said about the ~moments!!! Thank you SO MUCH. I'm so happy you liked it, Capi!!

I love the way he fucks Harry. God, I love the way Harry gets fucked. I should feel weird saying that, but it's beautiful.

No, don't feel weird! I rather love that about them as well! :-DDD

<3

[robinellen]

Very nice -- love the threesome too...and Draco's panic at the end. Just good all around :)

[lq_traintracks]

Thank you so very much! :-D

[iwao]

Well, I'm a bit intimidated after the comments you've got so far, and I'm having performance anxiety right now. I was going to run away an say nothing, but I can't! I still have to tell you how much I loved this! Perfect, gorgeous fic, such a brilliant start to the fest! And so HOT! I loved all the sexytimes, and that surprise threesome! Lol! And the boys are adorable. And I just want to start reading it again!

Thank you so very much. You are the best. *snuggles you muchly*

[lq_traintracks]

Oh! {{{{{{{{{you!}}}}}}}}}}} Saying you just want to start reading it over is one of the best comments to get! THANK YOU!!! <3