FIC: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride) (NC-17)

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Title: It's the Love of the Chase (That Created the Ride)
Author: lumosed_quill
Prompt: # 15
Summary: Draco and Harry are new Auror partners. It's a bit dull. Until they finally see some spell action and things get a lot more interesting (in Draco's pants).
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): (highlight for details): *sex in semi-public places, Hermione/Pansy/Ron*

Comments

[birdsofshore]

[Rambly comment of flail]
"What is this, a craft project?"

OMG, MA. I love you. I love your Draco, too. I love their banter, the spark between them. I REALLY love Harry sucking Draco off while having a wank and then them being all 'back to business' again, with Draco's legs wobbling. :DD

So many lovely lines. I did like eased the irksome knot there with Harry Potter's name on it.

God, Draco watching it in the Pensieve. MMMMMM. And then this is like a FESTIVAL of semi-public sex. I feel like you're playing our tune ;) Harry's arse against the window of the Knight Bus was hilarious and hot. I loved the way they work together, the excitement and thrill of the scenes. It seemed utterly believable they would both blow off tension like that afterwards. They'd nearly crashed into the Thames, and Draco's response was to get a raging erection. PERFECTLY reasonable, I'd say.

I told you I liked your shoes. Put out already. Hee!

Harry spurring Draco on in the bathroom was HOT as HOT and then this:

Draco had rolled up his shirt sleeves, and he realised as Potter rested there, eyes drifting open and closed, that his Dark Mark must be showing. And if Potter leaned just so, his head would rest full against Draco's arm… just in the crook… like he belonged there.

UGHHHH, you make a simple moment into something indescribably delicious. That is so fucking perfect, I'm gone. The description about them flirting under everyone's noses is as hot as the sex itself. You're amazing. That brush of the collarbone. NNNNNGH. I'm in awe at this.

And Harry snapping his fingers to light the flame, and standing there naked.

And the slow fucking, and Harry not coming, and then the sleepy rimming. *whimper*

I keep having to stop and get a drink of water or something. GOD.

Because it feels like 1996. Tell me, do you meet in the greenhouses under his Invisibility Cloak? Do you hex each other first

AHEHEHEHE and asdfghjkldfghjkl;

Draco and Hermione are HILARIOUS. This is THE BEST.

"I saved the feet," Weasley said, raising a hand.

OH GOD LOL

"I think you're all concussed."

SNORTING

Oh, dear, I wasn't meaning to do one of these flaily, quotish, rambling comments, but it was just too good and too funny and too surprising not too. Thanks so much for this, MA. It was an absolute treat and I had a whale of a time reading it. ♥

[lq_traintracks]

Oh, your comment makes me flail! :-DDD I love all the quoty bits, THANK YOU!!! I'm so happy you liked all the parts that weren't the semi-public sex (because it's hard to mess up semi-public sex really), so I'm really happy to hear about all those. I think Draco and Harry in the booth after the loo might be *my* favorite part, so I'm really pleased you picked that out specifically... those lines specifically, too. <3

I'm super happy you liked Hermione and Draco in this! And I'm thrilled you quoted Ron near the end, because I was hooting over him myself!

Bless you for this awesome comment, dear!