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FIC: Breaking the Line (NC-17)

Apr 26, 2014 00:54

Title: Breaking The Line
Author: kedavranox
Prompt: # 81
Summary: Draco was a Dom for hire. Harry was his best client. But Harry disappeared and now Draco’s retired. Draco’s doing fine (he’s even attending parties!) but who should show up to the latest BDSM shindig, but Harry Potter himself? Can Draco play with his ex-client without breaking the line?
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fic length: one shot, type: fic, kink: blood-play, fic length: medium, [admin] fest-2014, author: kedavranox, kink: knifeplay, rating: nc-17, contains: non-con (not h/d), contains: bdsm, contains: d/s

Comments 38

hdwriter April 26 2014, 05:03:27 UTC

Very nice...this is a respectful and gentle look into their needs and how they work together to meet them.

kedavranox May 16 2014, 21:52:17 UTC

Thank you :)

capitu April 26 2014, 12:36:57 UTC

I love their relationship and the dynamics. I think it shows exactly what you wanted, because even though they were together for a long time as Dom/sub, because that line, no matter how tempting it was for Draco, was never crossed, he never allowed himself to get close and personal with Harry, and of course now that Harry wants more he doesn't know what to do with that.

I loved the gloves, to me, almost more than anything, represented that line.

Amazing work with this story. I loved it. Thank you.

kedavranox May 18 2014, 18:48:04 UTC

Thank you ♥ I'm really glad you liked it. The gloves represented the line to me, too, so I'm happy you caught that as well. :)

raitala April 26 2014, 19:07:36 UTC

kedavranox May 18 2014, 18:48:50 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm pleased you found it sensual. That's exactly what I was going for. ♥

oakstone730 April 26 2014, 20:59:18 UTC

So good! I think I was holding my breath through most of this - it was hot, but more that you described so beautifully the tension between Harry and Draco. And the scenes were tremendous - just delicious. Really well done.

kedavranox May 18 2014, 18:49:18 UTC

Thank you so much. ♥

gracerene April 26 2014, 22:51:01 UTC

This was just gorgeous. I usually have a harder time reading first person, it just throws me out of the story for some reason, but a few paragraphs into this and I barely even noticed the difference ( ... )

kedavranox May 18 2014, 18:52:08 UTC

I'm glad the first person didn't throw you off.

I completely agree that most times we don't see the Dom's limits addressed, so I really wanted to put that out there, too.

I have a glove kink too (and a total hand fetish!) so I had so much fun with that just for the sexiness, but also for what it represented. That barrier between Harry and Draco that had to be broken.

I'm so happy you liked it. :D