FIC: Breaking the Line (NC-17)

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Title: Breaking The Line
Author: kedavranox
Prompt: # 81
Summary: Draco was a Dom for hire. Harry was his best client. But Harry disappeared and now Draco’s retired. Draco’s doing fine (he’s even attending parties!) but who should show up to the latest BDSM shindig, but Harry Potter himself? Can Draco play with his ex-client without breaking the line?
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[gracerene]

This was just gorgeous. I usually have a harder time reading first person, it just throws me out of the story for some reason, but a few paragraphs into this and I barely even noticed the difference.

I adored your Harry and Draco, their complicated relationship and their feelings for each other all mixed up in the past and the professional D/s relationship. I felt so much for Draco, wanting Harry desperately, but worried about his desire compromising the scene and worried that he wouldn't be able to give Harry what he wanted. I think it's a fact sometimes overlooked that Doms can have limits just as easily as subs, so I thought it was great how you showed Draco struggling with the scarring.

I really liked the sex scenes and how you incorporated the BDSM elements, especially the knife-play, which can be trickier to pull off. And GOD, the gloves! I have a (minor) glove!kink, so not only was it seriously hot, but I thought it was so powerful the symbolism of the gloves with the "line" that their relationship had.

Just, really fantastic job, MA! :)

[kedavranox]

I'm glad the first person didn't throw you off.

I completely agree that most times we don't see the Dom's limits addressed, so I really wanted to put that out there, too.

I have a glove kink too (and a total hand fetish!) so I had so much fun with that just for the sexiness, but also for what it represented. That barrier between Harry and Draco that had to be broken.

I'm so happy you liked it. :D