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FIC: let me see you stripped (down to the bone) (NC-17)

Apr 05, 2014 01:30

Title: let me see you stripped (down to the bone)
Author: anon
Prompt: # 23
Summary:
"So," Malfoy said. "Are you in? Or are you out?" He turned and looked at Harry squarely ( Read more... )

fic length: one shot, rating: nc-17, type: fic, fic length: medium, [admin] fest-2014, kink: exhibitionism

Comments 78

zeitgeistic April 4 2014, 17:41:44 UTC

OH MY GOD.
Why am I still at work???

dracotops_mods April 4 2014, 17:47:23 UTC

*grins* Totally our job this week to get you to read leather trousers!Draco fanfic while at work. ;)

zeitgeistic April 4 2014, 18:02:44 UTC

This fest will be the death of me.

zeitgeistic April 5 2014, 03:30:48 UTC

Oh my god, you even redeemed Pansy. Oh my god, I love you.

"No, but I can guess from that look on your face." RON! <3<3<3

Buoyant hair. lol. That has to be the most ridiculous description I've ever seen for Harry's hair, but it totally works and I love it.

And then, noooo Ron!

Oh my god, Luna! I ADORE LUNA.

omg Auror versus villain enemies theme. WHAT THE FUCK, AUTHOR. THIS IS SO HOT.

Oh I love that Harry is the first one to get the nascent idea to do more than strip on stage. The snogging thoughts. Lovely touch.

Hahah Harry complimenting Luna on her scarf after she says he has a nice penis.

Harry laughing before he does the blowjob shot <3

Oh my god, BLOWJOB ON STAGE.
"I hear you." Though he said it to Draco's lips. - WHAT are you doing to me???
RON. Ron Ron Ron Ron Ron. All my feels. ALL.

I love that Hermione signs her name "H", like it's just too long for her to bother with because she has better things to do. Incidentally, I also sign my name H.

Alice and Sheldon.

something strange and wonderful was happening inside ( ... )

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iwao April 4 2014, 17:57:45 UTC

I'm on my way home. Right now. Because sheesh! You post too early! Now I'll be biting my nails till I can get my hands (eyes?) on it! <33!

digthewriter April 4 2014, 18:26:39 UTC

That was amazing. From the prompt to the execution of the fic... just fantastic! <3

traintracks May 9 2014, 23:01:23 UTC

Thank you!!! :-)

gracerene April 4 2014, 18:33:31 UTC

JFC I can't even with this fic. Another crazy awesome scenario and I am so freaking impressed that you managed to fit this into the canon!verse. This fic was so great, and I LOVED all the characters and their characterizations here (Luna was so wonderful and confused/reluctantly supportive Ron was perfect). And the sexual tension? GOD, so hot and adding the actual sex in only seemed to ramp it up. Unbelievably sexy and so much fun!

traintracks May 9 2014, 23:02:05 UTC

THANK YOU!!! I so appreciate this! :-D

0idontknow0 April 4 2014, 19:54:12 UTC

Uh... *fans self and tries to grasp at words*
So, yeah.... *fans self some more*

I really should have done that commenting while reading thing because now I'm just at a loss with all that hot, pining, exhibitionist, adorably awkward H/D that's still in my brain.

Oh, and Ron just has lovely timing doesn't he? He's lucky he didn't pick the night they had sex, that would have traumatized him.

traintracks May 9 2014, 23:02:42 UTC

LOL! Indeed it would have. ;-) Thank you so much for the lovely comment on this!!