FIC: let me see you stripped (down to the bone) (NC-17)

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Title: let me see you stripped (down to the bone)
Author: anon
Prompt: # 23
Summary:
"So," Malfoy said. "Are you in? Or are you out?" He turned and looked at Harry squarely

Comments

[zeitgeistic]

Oh my god, you even redeemed Pansy. Oh my god, I love you.

"No, but I can guess from that look on your face." RON! <3<3<3

Buoyant hair. lol. That has to be the most ridiculous description I've ever seen for Harry's hair, but it totally works and I love it.

And then, noooo Ron!

Oh my god, Luna! I ADORE LUNA.

omg Auror versus villain enemies theme. WHAT THE FUCK, AUTHOR. THIS IS SO HOT.

Oh I love that Harry is the first one to get the nascent idea to do more than strip on stage. The snogging thoughts. Lovely touch.

Hahah Harry complimenting Luna on her scarf after she says he has a nice penis.

Harry laughing before he does the blowjob shot <3

Oh my god, BLOWJOB ON STAGE.
"I hear you." Though he said it to Draco's lips. - WHAT are you doing to me???
RON. Ron Ron Ron Ron Ron. All my feels. ALL.

I love that Hermione signs her name "H", like it's just too long for her to bother with because she has better things to do. Incidentally, I also sign my name H.

Alice and Sheldon.

something strange and wonderful was happening inside his chest. And his bollocks, of course. oh my fucking god, you. YOU.

"You're a toppy shit, aren't you?" -- Better slick up that arse, Harry.

"Did you just…want to see me?" Harry asked, Draco's fear seeming to somehow make him braver.
Draco nodded. -- Omg, MA, stop. STOP. I can't handle it anymore!

Harry would find himself smiling at a dripping tea bag. -- Uh huh. Because he wants to be teabagged with something dripping.

"Yeah. Screw it. I don't care how you do it. I'll follow your lead. Just do it." -- Harrrrrrrry. Oh my god. Them taking off their pants and just, naked, and, just oh my god.

Draco's hand began pulling, stroking, and he fucked his still-hard cock more slowly through his own spunk while he jacked Harry quickly.

Then the music stopped.

It just bloody stopped.

But Harry was on the edge, and Draco kept going. He knew Harry was close. Hell, everybody knew it.

He stayed buried deep in Harry's body, and as the crowd started to chant, he whispered in Harry's ear, "Come on, Potter. Come on, you beautiful fuck. Fuck, Harry, come on. Let me feel it." His hand started squeezing over and around the head just right. "Let me see you come, goddamnit."

THAT WHOLE SCENE. MY GOD. Did you know how much like like creampies in fic??? DID YOU? And he just kept going, like a motherfucking champ. God damn.

And no howlers. <3<3<3

Draco is so in love. SO. And Pansy. I adore her, unfeeling witch that she is. Can't she see true love is happening right on her stage? Oh my god, it was so intimate and amazing.

Ron is STILL signing his letters "Your Friend". So many feels.

OH MY GOD, THE LAST SCENE.

I am so fucking useless in this comment. COMPLETELY useless. But I love you, MA. I really do. You owned this prompt like Draco owns an audience.

[traintracks]

I've read this comment something like five or six times now. I can't tell you how happy I am that you like what I did with your prompt!!!!! Thank you, Z. <333

[zeitgeistic]

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