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K.A.verse 100 Drabbles: 001 - Ritual

Oct 25, 2009 00:19

For the 100 prompts claims over at K.A.verse
Title: Morning Ritual
Author: dr_vile
Prompt: Ritual
Fandom & Character(s): Animorphs - Jake
Rating: PG
Word Count: 349

( Morning Ritual )

k.a.verse, fanfiction, drabbles, jake berenson, animorphs, dr-vile (animorphs 100.1)

Comments 9

buffyangellvr23 October 25 2009, 19:10:10 UTC

great job :)

dr_vile October 26 2009, 10:43:49 UTC

Thanx :)

jadedkoi October 26 2009, 01:34:30 UTC

OOh, I like it. Proper level of angst for Jake in any book after #25 or so.

dr_vile October 26 2009, 10:49:39 UTC

Thanks :) I've always felt that Jake got noticeably angstier as the series went on - probably the burden of leadership taking its toll.

redsilverchains October 26 2009, 07:40:42 UTC

Ohhh, Jake. I love that the mechanics of his morning ritual remain the same...but what he feels about it is now entirely different. Great contrast.

dr_vile October 26 2009, 10:51:34 UTC

Thank you.

callispi October 26 2009, 21:12:42 UTC

So angsty but touching. Poor Jake -- he has such heavy burdens to carry, and you communicated them so well.

Great job!

isteillia October 27 2009, 04:42:02 UTC

I have to agree with everything said above- you nailed the heavy weight on his conscious, and the burdens that come with someone so young bearing so much. Wonderfully done. <333