A Rhythm Like You (7/?)

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Chapter 1:  http://dpracket.livejournal.com/32142.html
Chapter 2:  http://dpracket.livejournal.com/32417.html
Chapter 3:  dpracket.livejournal.com/33801.html
Chapter 4:  dpracket.livejournal.com/34221.html
Chapter 5:  dpracket.livejournal.com/34761.html
Chapter 6:  http://dpracket.livejournal.com/34958.html

"The beating of my heart is a drum, and it's

Comments

[tldreamer]

What a wonderful chapter! My favorite was your next to last paragraph, with his thoughts about all the people in his life!

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Thank you. :)

[kccalgal]

You keep writing schmoop. This was so sweet.

Loved his reflection on what he has since coming to Oakdale, and I LOVE the fact that you said it straight out that Reid is Jacob's father figure. Yes he is.

He even said I love you back to Katie. Awww.

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Thank you.

:)

[hopperl]

SO SO SO GREAT! While it was a short chapter, it really said so much! Guh! I can't wait for more.

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Thank you. I'm a little stuck on the next chapter.

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OMG; you're so sweet. I think you're an outstanding writer, so I'm flattered. :)

[joann414]

This was such a great chapter. I always loved the Katie, Reid, and Jacob interaction. You coveyed all of it perfectly. Made me smile, thinking of a ocntented Reid being able to say I love you back. Loved this

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He's just practicing so he can say it to Luke. :)

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Oh, and thank you.