challenge 07: house guests

[jadeandlilac]

Title: Almost Unwelcome
Author:jadeandlilac
Rating: K
Character/s/Pairings: Mary, Matthew, Richard, Mary/Matthew, Mary/Richard
Warnings: None

Comments

[littlemei]

This is really interesting. I like this idea that out of Matthew range Mary is able to be attracted to Richard, and the contrast of Matthew's blue eyes with Richard's grey.

[jadeandlilac]

Thank you! And yeah, that's the love square theory I'm holding onto, so I'm glad you like it! :)

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I love that first paragraph, the way Mary is watching Matthew's back, and Richard is doing the same to her. I can so picture this.

[jadeandlilac]

Oops, just saw this! I'm so glad you liked it :) I love the Matthew/Mary/Richard dynamic, so much potential for drama and angst!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Oh! Forgot to say: The night air slid over her, cold and quelling. Love that sentence. :)

[jadeandlilac]

Thank you! :D