SPN Fic: Center of Balance

Jun 28, 2010 08:06

Happy birthday to maychorian, who makes fandom a better place in so many ways. *frees the balloons*

Center of Balance
Sam, Dean, Castiel, PG, 1,900 words

a/n: Set between SPN 5x13 and 5x14, with a shout-forward to 5x18. Written for maychorian's birthday. She asked a while back for "Sam&Dean&Cas...something in a meadow." This is not nearly as peaceful as that sounds ( Read more... )

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enigmaticblues June 28 2010, 14:29:15 UTC
This was fantastic. I loved your descriptions, and how Dean pushed, and Sam knew better.

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dotfic July 5 2010, 21:49:56 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad the different elements worked well together.

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lexhibition June 28 2010, 15:16:12 UTC
Oh, YES. You've got such a deft touch with these three and everything between them. <333

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dotfic July 5 2010, 21:50:27 UTC
Thank you for the kind words! ♥

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chiiyo86 June 28 2010, 16:06:10 UTC
This fic left me with a warm feeling - sparring as a bonding exercise, how very Winchester. I love Castiel as a disapproving schoolteacher, I just can see his annoyed frown.&hearts Very sweet.

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dotfic July 5 2010, 21:52:32 UTC
Hee. Castiel has yet to get the sparring-as-bonding thing -- I hadn't planned for Dean to pin Castiel but then it sort of happened and I think of it as like the whoopie cushion thing, he's accepting Castiel.

Sam&Dean needed some sparring and bonding time, poor boys.

I'm so glad you liked!

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borgmama1of5 June 28 2010, 16:24:10 UTC
I would love to see some training like this in the show.

I like the way you wrote Dean pushing Cas. I see that in the show.

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dotfic July 5 2010, 21:53:24 UTC
Why does canon continue to withhold the sparring? Whyyyyy?

Thank you so much, I'm delighted you liked!

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writingpathways June 28 2010, 17:09:13 UTC
Oh this was awesome. Brothers again and hanging out with Castiel!

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dotfic July 5 2010, 21:54:50 UTC
They needed the brotherly sparring-bonding time. I think Castiel was thinking "these idiots need some sword-training" but it brought Sam&Dean closer together nonetheless. <3

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