One Moment

[dorksidefiker]

Title: One Moment
Author: dorksidefiker
Fandom: Young Avengers
Table/Prompt: Table 2/36. Gun
Character/Pairing: Vision, Billy, Tommy
Rating: PG
Word Count: 227
Summary: In which Vision does something that puts Billy in danger.
Authors Notes/Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Comments

[fai_dust]

This was great! I love how you did this for a hundred different reasons.

[iridania]

This was lovely!
Magic is unpredictable, even for - an maybe especially to - someone like the Vision, isn't it?
But the YA have each other's back ♥
Thanks for the nice read :)

[ragingpie]

Oh, this was quite nice! I wonder if Vision believes in luck...

[luminum]

Really subtle characterization of Vision. I love it. The setup reminds me of Kitty, Northstar, and Wolverine.

[philophrosyne]

It's a great slice of a moment, I feel the speed of it but I think it was too subtle for me. I didn't get/understand an emotion from Vision, can you explain it to me. He's such a hard charter to wrap my brain around.

[dorksidefiker]

I was going for dawning horror. Kind of like when you drop a jar of pickles, and there's that brief moment before it hits the floor and shatters where you try to catch it, even though you know you can't.

[philophrosyne]

Ooohhh. I can see it now.
For some reason the 1st time I read it I got a feeling of feelinglessness of action A + action B resulting in the death of a teammate. Like to fast to have an emotional reaction to something that hasn't happened yet.