"We Might be through with the Past, but the Past ain't Through With Us", Chapter Five

[donnanthebeast]

Title: "We Might be Through With the Past, but the Past Ain't Through With Us"
Author: becomingblurred
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Word Count: 3345
Rating: Currently PG
Summary: Patrick's a single father fresh out of college and sinking in debt. Pete, finally, after twentysomething years, decides that he needs to grow up and look for something more long-term. What

Comments

[elessar]

:\ you were very close to exceeding the maximum allowed spelling/grammar errors with this chapter. You might want to think about getting future chapters beta'd before I have to start rejecting them.

[becomingblurred]

Damn. Are they just grammatical/spelling? Because I'll be sure to find a beta that... specializes?... in that. Thank you for letting me know.

[elessar]

Yeah, it's mostly little stupid mistakes like

I just want you’re approval

instead of

I just want your approval.

[becomingblurred]

Damnnn. The next chapter shall be beta-ful.

[kittygrenade]

Magnolia calling Pete mommy is one of the cutest things ever!!! XD
You have no idea how happy I am right now to see this fic updated!!!

More soon please! *makes puppy eyes and hand you a cookie*

[becomingblurred]

Awh, I'm so glad you enjoy this! I will definitely work on this >_o Preferably more... consistently.

[kittygrenade]

I look forward to reading it whenever you decide to post again! =^-^=

*twiddles thumbs in anticipation*

[starry_sara]

so um...i absolutely loved this (:
haha magnolia is adorable.

and 'i guess i'll have to show you everything sometime'
[subtle yet not so subtle wink]

lol. love it. can't wait for more <3

[becomingblurred]

I'm so glad! More shall come... sometime XD;

[noelle19]

YAY FOR UPDATES! I love this story idea! You definately need to update this more often! Mag is so cute. Mommy Pete is too perfect. I literally squeed. Yes, I just said squeed. LOL!

And those pictures sound perfect. I love it. MORE PLEASE?!?!?!?

*hands over plate of cookies*

[becomingblurred]

Hahah, I should, shouldn't I? Thank you very much.

[strange_house]

haha pete and patrick making pancakes priceless
i love this story keep up th egood work:)

[becomingblurred]

Thank you very much, hun!