"We Might be through with the Past, but the Past ain't Through With Us", Chapter Five

[donnanthebeast]

Title: "We Might be Through With the Past, but the Past Ain't Through With Us"
Author: becomingblurred
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Word Count: 3345
Rating: Currently PG
Summary: Patrick's a single father fresh out of college and sinking in debt. Pete, finally, after twentysomething years, decides that he needs to grow up and look for something more long-term. What

Comments

[elessar]

:\ you were very close to exceeding the maximum allowed spelling/grammar errors with this chapter. You might want to think about getting future chapters beta'd before I have to start rejecting them.

[becomingblurred]

Damn. Are they just grammatical/spelling? Because I'll be sure to find a beta that... specializes?... in that. Thank you for letting me know.

[elessar]

Yeah, it's mostly little stupid mistakes like

I just want you’re approval

instead of

I just want your approval.

[becomingblurred]

Damnnn. The next chapter shall be beta-ful.

[elessar]

Danke ^.^