speed_rent My Addiction

[donnanthebeast]

Title: My Addiction
Author: Donner pockyjunkie
Feedback: Is hot sex on a beach with Wilson Jermaine Heredia
Pairing: Angel/Collins
Word Count: 1012
Rating: R for various curse words, references to drug addiction, transsexuality, sexuality, and bulimia
Genre: Drama, monologue
Summary: Angel has endured some pretty deep things. She has tried to make

Comments

[damnedimmortal]

Wow. WOW. Okay, so that was AMAZING.

Wow. I really love the way you wrote Angel. Just...ubelievable.

Your language in this was, simply put, superb. You portrayed emotion so well in this. And I LOVE the comparison of Collins being Angel's drug. It really works with the way you describe it.

Wow. I love this SO much. This = amazing.

(And thank you for the dedication! You are nothing short of inspirational!)

*LOVES*

[pockyjunkie]

Thank you so much! You're my inspiration, too, honey! Don't forget it :3

[boggartmoonhead]

Wow! I loved this, it was incredibly IC, and so real. Of course, some of the effect might've come from listening Where You Are by Rascal Flatts at the same time. Either way, this is great! *memories*

[becomingblurred]

Oh my, thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it... honestly.

Music is such a main influence in my life, so seeing that a song gave you more feeling makes me so much more happier. Thank you.

[boggartmoonhead]

:D

You're welcome. I don't understand people who don't love music as much as I do. I think music is the main reason I breathe.

[musicalsarah99]

this was simply awesome...I wish I was as eloquent as some of the previous commenters and come up with something to say that expresses what I thought of it, but I'm not, so I just have to say amazing job.

[becomingblurred]

Oh, it's quite alright. All I want is to see that people have read it and felt something from it. Thank you so much!

[rossignol1984]

Wow. That was so intense and so perfect. All the emotions and everything... it was as if you allowed the reader to have a look into Angel's mind. Amazing.

[becomingblurred]

Thank you so much! I am so glad that people enjoy this story because it really is my baby... haha.

[shillaire]

Wow. Gawd. Just...wow. I am absolutely speechless. If there was a contest for best "voice" in the Angel category, I would insist they give it to you. It's ironic because last night I re-read a lot of my fic (and stunned myself by how much there actually IS, kinda embarressing really) because I have this plot bunny that needs to be dealt with in the first person and was looking for her voice after such a long absence.

And then I read this. And there it is. I hear her so much more clearly in this piece than all the others I've written.

There are so many lines I wish I'd written that I don't know where to begin. But this one, I still wanted to think that everyone was good at heart. Stupid, right? tore me up. Maybe it hit too close to home, given my recent predicament, but it really captures the essence of Angel to me. I see her as so empathetic that it can cut her deeply sometimes and result in bitterness and hurt, not to mention self-destructive behavior.

I could ramble on and on, but suffice to say, I love this.

[becomingblurred]

I'm blushing so much right now, you have no idea...

I was so nervous to attempt to write Angel in first person, and deep down I'm a bit apprehensive to write her because I feel that sometimes I make her come off too much like me, and too little like herself... movie/Broadway or otherwise. But seeing your comment made me realize that maybe I wasn't as farfetched as I thought.

Thank you so much, dear! *hugs*

[shillaire]

i'm not one to give praise lightly, so you know i'm pretty impressed here.

BTW, change "convent money" to "covet" ; )

I think there's always a fear, as writers, that we put so much of ourselves into a character that it ceases to be authentic and becomes autobiographical, emotionally at least. Then it ceases to be believable.

At the same time, I also believe we are attracted to write those who're somewhat like us in nature in the first place, so, as in this case, it will read authentic if that happens.

I love that you show Angel as addicted to Collins as he is to her. I think we've all been guilty of exploring Collins' passion for her but not so much hers for him. Ironically, that's part of the impetus for my new plot bunny, though I fear it will pale next to this.

[becomingblurred]

I better correct that...

You must try. Please, do so! You're a great writer, better than me... seriously. I'm sure whatever you put out next will be amazing!