Refracting, Converging (a Captain America/Iron Man fic)

[dome_epais]

Title: Refracting, Converging
Rating (both art/fic): The art is R, the fic is NC-17
Pairing: Captain America/Iron Man (with semi-explicit Mary Jane/Peter, and minor Pepper/OFC)
Word Count: 6,100
Warnings: Language. Explores several kinks, including voyeurism, exhibitionism, and D/s. Explicit homosexual sex, a heterosexual D/s scene without sex.
Fic

Comments

[penumbren]

*fans self*

Wooo, boy. That was... really, really well-done. Hot and funny and sweet and a lovely viewpoint of both the D/S relationship and the voyeuristic tendencies that Tony has. (Emphasizing how he cuts himself off from the world and is basically a voyeur-via-armour all the time was a brilliant touch, too.)

And the artwork? If I were Tony, I'd probably have an entire suite of cameras in my bedroom, just to record all that lovely imagery of Steve being... Steve. Steve's little teasing look over his shirt is verrrry nice. :)

Excellent stuff, both of you!

[northstar_rocks]

:: THUD :: that ladies and gentlemen was the sound of the reader passing out and hitting the floor. :D

<3

[joykit]

hot and cute is a wonderful combination

[niki_chidon]

You managed to make me happy about waking up alone - I didn't have to explain chuckling over breakfast to the men in my life. You almost made me late for work, too. I had to wrench myself away just as Steve had removed his socks. Now that's torture!

And the image. Oh yes, oh *so* yes. Damn, that's hot.

[ladyblkrose]

Oh Oh Oh Dayyyyum, Baby this was so gooood. I loved the little touches of Tony and Steve falling in love. How bashful Steve is and how distracted Tony can become by just looking at him. The banter between Tony and Pepper was cherry. And tossing in Pepper's new girlfriend and her using Tony as a trial by fire was just fun. But my favorite parts were Peter and MJ's D/s relationship especially when she made him kneel by her at dinner, it made me squeeeeeee.
Thank you for sharing such a hot and loving fic. All involved showed just how much they loved their partners and how far they will go to please them.