Refracting, Converging (a Captain America/Iron Man fic)

[dome_epais]

Title: Refracting, Converging
Rating (both art/fic): The art is R, the fic is NC-17
Pairing: Captain America/Iron Man (with semi-explicit Mary Jane/Peter, and minor Pepper/OFC)
Word Count: 6,100
Warnings: Language. Explores several kinks, including voyeurism, exhibitionism, and D/s. Explicit homosexual sex, a heterosexual D/s scene without sex.
Fic

Comments

[clair3]

*nosebleed/*

[garrideb]

This fic and art are so, so good. I adore fics that have couples discussing kinks and boundaries, and the way you framed that with Tony developing new software was incredibly inventive.

The banter was fantastic. I loved exchanges like this one:
“We both know I want you for your mind,” Tony protested.

Steve made a face, and said, “We need to explore careers where that doesn’t sound like a legitimate threat.”

And I loved that Pepper got a girlfriend! Her introduction made me grin. Not many people could play Tony so smoothly. The "did you just come out to me?" line was gold. Marchessa, Pepper, and MJ were all awesome. And Steve is such an accommodating boyfriend. ;-)

The art is... guh. I love how Steve's making eye contact as he's undressing, and Tony's raised eyebrow.

[ladygrendel]

Oh my god, this has to be the kinkiest thing I've ever read without every really getting explicit. Such a tease!

[green_grrl]

What a wonderfully smart, unique, interesting, and HOT story! Every single one of the characters shines.