ladyloves! - a f/f comment ficathon

Jun 23, 2012 11:00

I have been wanting to do this for awhile, so, LET'S.

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perfectlystill June 25 2012, 23:49:00 UTC
revenge, amanda/emily, the beast you've made of meThere's a bruise swelling on Amanda cheek, a cut on her forehead, blood drying on her skin. She can only see through the tiniest slit of her right eye. She knocks on the door and quickly opens her palm to slap it a few times instead, the cuts on her knuckles stinging. Her bones ache and she's sure she'll be covered in purples and blues and blacks tomorrow ( ... )

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stainofmylove June 26 2012, 05:32:56 UTC
This is seriously everything that I love about this ship, thank you so much for writing. Your Amanda POV is so sharp and constantly reassessing, moving, dealing, not dealing ... really stunning. I also love moments like this:

She opens her freezer and Amanda follows the line of her spine as she bends over, wants to count the knobs, slot her fingers between them and press and press and press until Emily squirms under the touch.

where it becomes both so clearly sexual and so clearly possessive and violent at the same time. It's the perfect vibe for them. And the ending lines are also especially killer.

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