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Sleepover (Ensemble, Part 2 of 3)

Nov 22, 2008 17:44

Title: Sleepover
Character/Pairing: Ensemble
Spoilers: Set in between "Business Trip" and "Frame Toby"
Word Count: 3,343
Rating: PG
Summary: Michael decides to have a sleepover at the office. Shenanigans ensue. (Part 2 of 3)
Author's Note: Ohhhh, you guys are all so awesome it almost causes me actual pain! Thanks for the great feedback on the first ( Read more... )

the office, fic: the office, fanfiction, office: ensemble

Comments 61

bohemian__storm November 23 2008, 02:57:11 UTC

I don't want this to end. It's like the most brilliant Office episode ever and I want it to be on my TV next week!

dollsome November 23 2008, 21:23:18 UTC

Aw, thank you, homie! :D I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Maybe you could ... print out a page of it, and hang it on your TV. When The Office is on. Next week.

A genius solution, if I say so myself!

free_reverie November 23 2008, 03:05:42 UTC

OH MAN.

You can do that thing!

Where Michael is annoying and inappropriate, but then he's truly disheartened and hurt and you realize that he's just unable to say what he means and then you feel badly and want to hug him.

You can do that!

This is... this is just stellar. I mean honestly, every character rings true, and is wonderful, and I love every line of this.

I would totally have a sleepover with Dunder Mifflin. ♥

dollsome November 23 2008, 21:24:17 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! That obnoxious/heartbreaking balance for Michael is always such a fine line to walk, so I'm glad you think I can do that! :D

I would totally have a sleepover with Dunder Mifflin. ♥

Man, WHO WOULDN'T?

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dollsome November 23 2008, 21:24:40 UTC

NICE. :D

Thank youuuu!

crackers4jenn November 23 2008, 03:23:16 UTC

Miiiiiiiiiiiichael! Oh, no!

And thus I will obnoxiously copy/paste my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE LINES. If this means I have to reread part 2 all over again? So be it. It's a price I will just have to suck up and pay.

There are things you can do. With coconuts, or volleyballs.

Oh my god, I died. WITH COCONUTS. OR VOLLEYBALLS. Also, it pleased me immensely that Michael was so helpful in pointing Jim in the direction of picking him as his choice of desert island castaway. The build-up in that portion of dialogue was fantastic, and it worked well in this script-format.

Another man I have kissed: Mose. He sometimes appreciates a peck on the temple before he goes to bed. It’s not unusual. Just because certain issues prevent him from leaving the beet farm doesn’t mean he doesn’t crave the immediacy of human touch. Of course, there are other days when physical contact sends him into a violent frenzy. I’ve gotten good at telling which kinds of days are which. Had to. Otherwise, I’d probably be missing my right eye. If not my right eye, then my ( ... )

dollsome November 23 2008, 21:26:35 UTC

YOU ARE SO AWESOME WITH YOUR LINE-PASTING. I kinda love you. And by 'kinda,' I mean 'truly, madly, deeply.' Uncomfortable? Maybe. I trust you to deal with it, though. You've got that kind of power.

Basically: thank youuuuu, buddy!

(Also, Pam is totally looking at Toby and being enchanted by his Tales of Wilderness Retreats in the picture of my icon, and how is that a smile of anything but TRUE LOVE. HOW. This is no normal Pam smile! I feel compelled to appeal to you on this subject, because I know you got my back.)

counteragent November 23 2008, 03:24:31 UTC

Perfect again. Especially loved lyin' Ryan in this one.

And this:

There are things you can do. With coconuts, or volleyballs.

I shouted with laughter.

dollsome November 23 2008, 21:27:19 UTC

:D :D Thank youuu!

'Lyin' Ryan' maybe made me giggle too much. RHYMING! I may or may not be easily amused.