Hear Me Now: Prologue

[dolce_amore93]

Title: Hear Me Now

Comments

[snowmore]

Dolce,
You know I love your writing, but I might have to wait until you have completed this story or know that they've found their way back to each other. This chapter makes me incredibly sad and I don't think I can work with that emotion right now.

This chapter is well written. Hence, the pain I feel.

I'll be back. Down the road when Luke's journey changes course. :)

[dolce_amore93]

Aww, well thank you, an I understand completely. :)

[speechless16]

This is great so far but oh Luke *shakes head* Why are you so stupid??
I cant wait for more to ease my pain Im feeling right now just thinking of how Reid is gonna feel.

[dolce_amore93]

Thank you! :)

More to come soon! :D

[ally_6677]

Oh Luke... it isn't the end of the world if you can't say it back. But don't run away from your problems.

and Reid? Poor man. On his day off, of all days. *sigh*

[msluredin]

LUKE!!!!!
Oh what is going to happen with Reid when he realizes Luke left?? :(
I imagine lots of begging and apologizing when Luke comes back. I hope Reid makes Luke work for it.
This is nothing I want to happen, but great prologue! Curious to see how it plays out.

[dolce_amore93]

Thanks!

God, I think I'd die if something like this happened on the show, that would be awful! :'(

I'm only comfortable with something like this playing out when I have control of how it ends. LOL.

[ltklo]

Wow, this is a messed up beginning ... but a great start to a story! I'm looking forward to where you will take this.

[dolce_amore93]

Thank you!

The words "This is a messed up beginning" seriously made me one happy chick. Hehehe.