Dolce, You know I love your writing, but I might have to wait until you have completed this story or know that they've found their way back to each other. This chapter makes me incredibly sad and I don't think I can work with that emotion right now.
This chapter is well written. Hence, the pain I feel.
I'll be back. Down the road when Luke's journey changes course. :)
This is great so far but oh Luke *shakes head* Why are you so stupid?? I cant wait for more to ease my pain Im feeling right now just thinking of how Reid is gonna feel.
LUKE!!!!! Oh what is going to happen with Reid when he realizes Luke left?? :( I imagine lots of begging and apologizing when Luke comes back. I hope Reid makes Luke work for it. This is nothing I want to happen, but great prologue! Curious to see how it plays out.
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You know I love your writing, but I might have to wait until you have completed this story or know that they've found their way back to each other. This chapter makes me incredibly sad and I don't think I can work with that emotion right now.
This chapter is well written. Hence, the pain I feel.
I'll be back. Down the road when Luke's journey changes course. :)
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I cant wait for more to ease my pain Im feeling right now just thinking of how Reid is gonna feel.
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More to come soon! :D
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and Reid? Poor man. On his day off, of all days. *sigh*
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Oh what is going to happen with Reid when he realizes Luke left?? :(
I imagine lots of begging and apologizing when Luke comes back. I hope Reid makes Luke work for it.
This is nothing I want to happen, but great prologue! Curious to see how it plays out.
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God, I think I'd die if something like this happened on the show, that would be awful! :'(
I'm only comfortable with something like this playing out when I have control of how it ends. LOL.
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The words "This is a messed up beginning" seriously made me one happy chick. Hehehe.
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