SHINee Fic: OnTae

Aug 18, 2009 20:25

lie to me (before you let me go)
taemin/jinki, romance
what you're looking for is often something you already have. )

p: ontae

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jaybomb August 19 2009, 01:37:57 UTC
what. You didn't even let me finish the rough draft before posting LOL

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heechul_oppa August 19 2009, 01:43:07 UTC
LMAO. Haha. Well. Now you get the final draft. ;)

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heechul_oppa August 19 2009, 01:57:24 UTC
probably not even understanding why their laughing
Dude. Please tell me when I make stupid mistakes like this. DDD: *cries*

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jaybomb August 19 2009, 01:59:14 UTC
this is me. laughing at you.

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sophiaplease August 19 2009, 01:53:32 UTC
sahjdgvkjasgdjkasgdjkgasjkdgajksdgh ;_____;

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heechul_oppa August 19 2009, 02:44:38 UTC
*cries* Such wonderful keysmashing. ♥ Haha~

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chinagirl4evr August 19 2009, 01:55:53 UTC
Aw, that was really beautiful. You write it realistically

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heechul_oppa August 19 2009, 02:45:18 UTC
Baw, thank you thank you thank you. That's one of the nicest compliments a writer can receive. ;~;

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pumadragon August 19 2009, 02:09:20 UTC
SOBBING HYSTERICALLY. ONTAAAAAAAAAE.

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pumadragon August 19 2009, 02:10:04 UTC
): what is it with you and dramatically anti-climactic endings? kills. I WANT MAKE OUT TIME.

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pumadragon August 19 2009, 02:10:41 UTC
“Hello, sunshine." Favorite part. Ugh, I just. ♥

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heechul_oppa August 19 2009, 02:16:01 UTC
LMAO. kayz.

EDIT::

Onew gasped as Taemin turned away, spinning him around like a fairy princess at a ball. "My love," he sang, bending down on one knee as he grasped for Taemin's hand. "Oh, Taemin. You, love of my life, how could I have led you so far astray." He whips out a bouquet of flowers from his pants. "Let us run away into the horizon on Siwon the white stallion like GDragon on crack."

Taemin then swooned into Onew's arms and they ran off into the dust as the townsfolk waved tearfully with scarves from their doorsteps.

"Bless them," they cried. "Bless them both." :')


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heechul_oppa August 19 2009, 02:45:58 UTC
Guh. Thank you. Really, it means a lot. ♥♥♥

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