Ungai's Plan by Hairann [oneshot#50]

[hairann]

Title: Ungai's Plan
Author: Hairann
Theme: Nemesis
Genre: Drama, Action
AU/CU: Cannon
Rating: T
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 1034
Summary: There once was a priestess who found binding a demon to be the hardest thing she ever had to do. 50 years later another priestess found releasing him to be the easiest. History repeats itself, only this time

Comments

[pos_sess_ed]

What are they getting themselves into now!?! It sounds like another war is simmering!

I really liked Kagome's choice of weapon in this, lol!

[hairann]

Thanks for commenting Poss-chan and glad you like her weapon :).

[tangled6]

Loved this! And the snowball :) Just a few things though for future reference: "I am grown woman" needs an "a" in it; it is spelled "outcome", not "out come"; and you continuously had the characters describe her as the Shikon no Tama, which means you're calling her the Shikon Jewel. Did you mean that she is the miko, and thus the protector, of the Jewel? If so, then you would probably describe her as the Shikon no Miko. Just thought I'd point that out. LOVED the chapter though. I simply cannot stop reading this story! <3

[hairann]

Thanks for commenting and for pointing out my bloopers. I was almost out of time when I finally finished this and got it posted, that's why there are so many mistakes hehe. I'll go change those and thanks again for pointing them out to me :).

[tnew78]

Ungai is always such a delicious character to write, so much to be expounded upon, and you have not failed in the least!

[hairann]

Thanks for commenting and glad you like my portrayal of him.

[lrdrandallslady]

Do you have a link to the rest? I was gone from the comm for a while and I think I missed out on a bunch of the background.

Even so, you do write Ungai wonderfully well. He's such a bastard. I'm looking forward to seeing how this will all play out.

[hairann]

Thanks for commenting and glad you like how I portrayed him :).

To catch up, all but the last two parts can be found here: http://www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/3217/1

For the other one here: http://community.livejournal.com/dokuga_contest/678831.html#cutid1

And for this story, if you even get behind again, you can always look me up under the Community Tags, the entire story is posted here first :).

[nisee39]

ohhhh...I can't wait to see what you've got planned next. I loved the snowball--very in character for Kagome! Looking forward to more!

[hairann]

Thank you for commenting and glad you liked it :).