“Acknowledgement” by SangoShadowphoenix [Drabble #63]

[lin_yun]

Title: Acknowledgment

Comments

[hasu86]

You've definitely got the bittersweet down. ::le sigh:: It makes me sad. Being so close yet so far away. My heart aches but I'm angry at them too. >.< Just run away together and be happy! Gah! I suppose I'm too idealistic. ^^;

[lin_yun]

lol! Run away indeed!
But it's a pity that neither Sesshoumaru or Kagome are that sort of people. T___T Looks like they're up for a few decades of grief....? (the question mark is that corner of my brain that thinks this might make a nice serial....torturous, but nice. heh.)

[pos_sess_ed]

This was very sad. You wove a very melancholy mood with very few words, nicely done!

[lin_yun]

Thank you! I was worried it was a little too direct, but since it's only 100 words, there's nothing i can do about it. gah!!! so haard!! ^__^

[salomesensei]

Lovely tone and mood. Bittersweet it certainly is.

[lin_yun]

Thanks!
Hahaha, it seems I hit the mark in my Author's Notes --- after writing this piece, I decided I hadn't tortured myself enough, and that the possibility of trying another 100-word bittersweet is very, very high. Oh, the things we do to ourselves..... -___-;

[replicantangel]

D: Oh, dear. How painful. But you wrote it beautifully!

[lin_yun]

Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it, despite how painful it was. ^__^