Title: Accountability
Author: Dodger Winslow
Genre: Gen
Word Count: 5,020
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to In My Time of Dying
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys, I'm just stalking them for a while.
Summary: Karl Buckman had been driving a big rig since he was eighteen, and he’d never even had so much as a speeding ticket until now. For the life of him, he didn’t
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Nice job.
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The truck driver's horror at what he thought he had done always left me chilled and wondering about what had happened to him (even if this is fiction and nothing really "happened" to him)
The voice of the driver is so real, the language and the tone.
The grief of the boys. Your description of the Dean's eyes.
I so love your writing. You always bring the real situations and emotional response.
Thank you.
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So very much, reality of tone and dialog is hugely important to me, so it squees me to know I hit the right mix.
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And the description of the boys is heart wrenching.
(and nice touch with the John's just missing a while, 'cause we totally know he's coming back... somehow... someday!)
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Hey, I think he would. I think being dead would mean Karl would have insight into the fact that John had also died. And since he didn't, I'm sticking to the idea they weren't walking the stairway to heaven together, baby. :D
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I think being dead would mean Karl would have insight into the fact that John had also died. I was wondering about that, which of course just leads to the conclusion that Johnny isn't dead and that what the boys burned wasn't their Dad... I mean remember what the reaper chick said - it's her sandbox. So John either has a plan (and he's always got a plan) to bust out of Hell (I'm not sure how he gets his body back, but certainly easily managed by John Winchester), or he isn't acutally dead, but in the process of paying off or double crossing the Demon before he comes back to his boys. (At which point they both ought to hit him really ( ... )
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