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anonymous
November 24 2005, 04:57:44 UTC
eww, yucky way for her to die but oh well, makes for suspense and all that good stuff. alshaia is really taking a central role at this point, which is good providing that you keep her character as complex as it is right now. granted she also has the potential to develop a lot more, but right now besides for thad and be she seems like the only one who could really lead the plot, purely out of how much time you've spent with her as the center of the narrative
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