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Lies My Parents Told Me by plural_entity [Rated PG-13]

Jan 29, 2006 05:15

Celebrate the Season fic request for Kelly/Marionette

A special thank-you plural_entity for writing this volunteer fic as part of the free for all!

Title: Lies My Parents Told Me
Author: plural_entity
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything, really. Everything belongs to J.K. Rowlings. Title and some quotes lifted from ‘Buffy the Vampire: Season Seven’; character of Crowanis is ( Read more... )

author: plural_entity, exchange: celebrate the season, length: one post

Comments 7

spiffthegirl January 29 2006, 15:47:00 UTC

Ooh. Gave me shivers up and down my spine! Very nice. I liked it. (:

funonastick January 30 2006, 01:27:07 UTC

This is Kelly, thanks for such an interesting read! :) I really appreciated my gift. You did an AMAZING job! Thank you so so much!

plural_entity January 30 2006, 11:30:45 UTC

I'm really glad. Despite the fact that I didn't get it into a beta, I really spent a lot of time on this fic. School was my problem. I got a D in last nine weeks and a C for the semester average, and my parents were trippin'. But I went out and bought and extra notebook so I could write up little parts and draw and outline during class. Especially during Latin and English and Math. :P

I'm really glad you like it, cause this thing was like my baby. I had tons of fun writing it and if I had had more time, I was going to go in deeper and do more stuff, but when it came down to it, I just didn't have enough time.

huh triospleasure January 31 2006, 17:48:42 UTC

Pure silver, with the elaborate scrawling of the words “Always Pure, Always True, Always Malfoy” in old French.

Lies indeed...

~T~

Cool Beans! anonymous February 1 2006, 05:31:10 UTC

Well, you definitely chose angst and ran with it! I would almost always choose angst over fluff myself- angst good! :-) But there were cute things too- I liked all the many cross-House pairings; in addition to Draco / Hermione (obviously!) the Harry / Pansy and Ginny / Blaise- and I liked pregger Tonks too! On the subject of Ginny though, I didn't quite understand what happened to her- apparently she left headquarters but she didn't go with the raiding party, or at least I didn't see her mentioned during the raid, so where did she go and how was her body returned to HQ? And will Harry and Pansy ever get their baby back? You could totally turn this into a novel-length fic, you have a wealth of ideas and characters, including your OC's Rose, Anna and Crow, to work with. But in any event, it was an enjoyable read and you, along with all other backup writers, are a hero in my book ( ... )

rainsrabble February 6 2006, 23:24:00 UTC

Very twisted plot. I especially liked the twist on the warewolves. The way that Crow wanted to tell them that she was a traiter after being assured that they thought that she was loyal...that was great.

You definitely hit the mark with the total angst. It just went from one tragidy to another. The Ginny Weasly death was especially poignant, especially after everyone had made such a big deal about her staying behind...

Rain