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To Be Alone (With You): Chapter Ten

Oct 26, 2011 22:48

Title: To Be Alone (With You): Chapter Ten
Author: dizzycalm beta'd by the lovely Madneto
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: alcoholism, violence, sexual situations
Author's Note: The epilogue will be posted next week and I might start writing little ficlets in this verse later on.
Summary: Based on this prompt which I wrote and decided to take on myself.
AU ( Read more... )

x-men, verse: au, pairing: erik/charles, fic: to be alone (with you)

Comments 9

crimsoncrow October 27 2011, 03:38:06 UTC

....I want to cry I am so happy. You gave us this big pile of angst and then this chapter of pure happiness. OK, not pure happiness...BUT NINA IS ALIVE! I really, I honestly thought she would be dead. And yes she's bruised and that sucks and Shaw is a big time douche but SHE LIVES! And in my brain she'll be having awesome red hot Azazel sex sometime soon. Well...not too soon all considering but in the future ( ... )

lifefiction October 27 2011, 08:11:45 UTC

This story is amazing I absolutely ♥ it!

jingjinglan October 28 2011, 00:04:48 UTC

I AM SO HAPPY THEY'RE HAPPY

I was sooooo worried that somehow Charles would be paralyzed but I see how you worked that into the story without actually making him paralyzed

I'm a bit sad that the story is ending though :( but I really enjoyed the ride!

Thank you so much! :)

tea_and_trifles October 31 2011, 05:04:38 UTC

What a conclusion! The Shaw episode filled me with momentary fear, but Charles came through in the end -- it is almost as if when he stopped fighting against himself, his powers found new strength. It was very satisfying to have Shaw put in his place -- I had worried about him from the start. Bastard.

You really put my heart -- and Erik's and Charles' -- through the wringer but it was totally worth it to read Charles finally admit his love, and their old childhood haunt was the perfect setting. All the heartache was worth it, for Erik had to prove his love was true blue despite all the obstacles; Charles needed to see that Erik would never willingly leave him. Both of them took paths that had seemed to lead away from each other (Charles and Moira, and Erik and his explorations) but they never strayed from each other emotionally, which is what counted.

And Charles finally confronting his mother was an unexpectedly lovely revelation and catalyst.

Can't wait for the epilogue, and any other stories that you write.

laury_kos November 15 2011, 01:39:59 UTC

sorry it took me so long to comment xD (not that you notice)

;___; I'm so glad there's going to be a happy ending (maybe?), yet this is happy enough for me!
wow, so it all that was need,Charles'mom to tell the truth, so that Charles could give in; beautiful!!!
and hot, yeah it was hot :3

I'm still waiting for next chapter :D
and yay for more little fics

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